M back with My Own Version of Tere ishq Nachaya

Hello everyone hope u all r fine

so the thing is i was working on the this song for some time because i like bullah shah and his divine poetry
tere ishq nachaya is my most fav so i was trying to compose it in my own way some thing like rock n classic so here it is
Do listen n plz comment me
the guitar n vocals r by me
and the compostion is alsoo by mee
i need the cooment bcause m gona launch this song
so plz comment me

Here is the link
https://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=6736114&q=hi

or
www.soundclick.com/sunny(pk)

 

Hmmm..., this isn't done bad, the guitaring sounds a little common but it is good. The vocals aren't bad either, some tiny Sur faults, especially in the oooooooo ooooooo part, so try to improve that.
So you want to release this song, in my opinion it isn't finished at all, i think you should add some more in this song, some drums, percussions, bass etc.!
Overall this song is sounding good, you also own a good voice, hope to hear the version you want to release someday and maybe complete with the missing instruments i mentioned before. Anyhow, i wish you all the best with this song, take care and keep going man!!!

 

thankx alot man
yup i want that kind of comments
its kind of unpluged the finall version will b a studio record with all instruments

yup i will practise more n more to improve it n add more variation in it
thnkx alot

 

Don't forget to post the final version here man, at least a demo version!
Good luck man!!!

 

Made some songs along with 2 other IGT-ians too, Rakesh and Parry!

https://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=645920
Wahi surat, 2 versions a kind of Ghazal version and a Latin version, this one Rakesh sung it and he made the tune aswell, i made the music.

https://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_music.cfm?bandID=824370
Mein Kho Jaoon (Keoraf & Parry)
This song Parry made the tune and he sung it aswell and i made the music!

 

of course not
i will upload

 

these are nice work so u can help me about adding other instruments?

 

link refreshed

https://soundclick.com/share?songid=6736114

 

why dint you use acoustic?

 

bcause i want to make it a little Rock style
but m working on a acoustic version tooo