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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Mar 15, 2009.

  1. dhoondh rahe ho kisi ko
    vo kahega tumko, and ...she is so swept away with his indifference

    yaad aati hai...
    usse bhoolane ki aadat hai and... she is so submerged in thier story..

    time guzar jaata hai
    unn khaali khaali annkoon main and ... she is so determined to find herself..

    kuch likh de agar
    gool soft chote nakoonon vaali ungaliyoon se and... she hides her body from all for many days...
     
  2. satan_4_infinit

    satan_4_infinit New Member

    nice poem...atleast sum feamles r makin a foray into the lyrics world...great goin...y dont u make a song...wud be great...

    nwys keep up da gud wrk
     
  3. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Didn't cut through at all.
    Sounded like a lame fusion hindi rock band.

    Robbed all the seriousness.
     
  4. detritus

    detritus New Member

    +1

    crowd pleasing antics.
     
  5. wahy dont you ppl simply say ...bundle ..beekarr ...i wuld appriciate that'
    be truthful the next time
    i think this was preety decent and good and best in its jonour
     
  6. detritus

    detritus New Member

    what does that word even mean?
     
  7. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    It was intended to be Genre.

    Indians pronounce it the way it was erroneously written.
     
  8. detritus

    detritus New Member

    because, most of them probably dropped out of school in eighth grade.
    They probably think centre = centur, so genre = jonur?
     
  9. y dont you show someof ur skills ... holllow fellas

    5th grade...........!
     
  10. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    ^LOL
    This is why I keep coming back to IGT
     
  11. kill the bugs and busters....they r products of factories
     
  12. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    frankly, the poem is'nt good enough....
    I have'nt read much of this genre, but it aint pleasin' much......
     
  13. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    Aye aye Cap'n!
     
  14. detritus

    detritus New Member

    Aye, we'll send 'er to Davy Jone's underwear drawer.
     
  15. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    That slimy octopus thing wore an underwear?

    jeez.....,
     
  16. fairandlovely

    fairandlovely peeka-boo

    ugh you grossed me out buster. That is some achievement I tell ya.
     
  17. alpha1

    alpha1 I BLUES!

    We have a noo puppet.
     

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