Lyrics written by me....hate stuff (mostly)

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by westarend, Aug 11, 2005.

  1. westarend

    westarend New Member

    living in this hell,
    which is burried deep,
    beneath the world of pretence,
    i breed my sorrow and anger.

    the madness above matches the insanity beneath
    where the madness is created by the hate we breath,
    no one is honest, acting under a blanket of skin,
    which bleeds at the sight of jealousy when kindness is dim.

    so we are forced to act, and enact, play and die
    with the same spirit of detest and hate,
    we mock ourselves in the quest to make,
    a perfect world filtered of the victorious detest of life.

    die, die, die u bastard,
    die with the wounds from the sword created with my mental insanity,
    moulded to reality with the confirmity that nothing is true.
    i will see up above and wait u to fall below.
    u will wonder of the existence of heaven,
    which u left the moment ur life was slain.

    ( so, how tis?)
  2. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    the first 2 verses were good and the rest were crappy!
  3. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    am feeling too sleepy to check rite now ... will chek in the morning ...
  4. westarend

    westarend New Member

    well thanx, man.......
  5. westarend

    westarend New Member

    thanx ssslayer.......
  6. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    nice stuff...but i guess u can improve da last verse a bit....
  7. westarend

    westarend New Member

    @cypher, even devil said the same thing........i will try to change it........

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