Lyric Contest

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Ali Akber, Jan 2, 2006.

  1. Ali Akber

    Ali Akber New Member

    This game has been revised.
    now write ur own lyrics/peom and post it here

    4000 points for first prize
    2500 2nd prize
    1000 3rd prize

    send if entrested[:D]
  2. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    lemme start this one.....this is my best poem ive ever written coz its related to my personal life.......


    Wen the wind was dull,
    And the sky was low,
    In my life,there was no flow.
    It felt like,
    FATE had given me a huge blow.

    Amidst the clouds of darkness,
    There came the rays of hope,
    I knew i had to win,
    Even wen there was no scope.

    Frustration seemed to come in,
    Like an uninvited guest,
    Success was like a stranger,
    Who had been put to rest.

    But it was the belief within,
    Tht seemed to tell,
    Hey why r u livin,
    Like a citadel tht fell.

    I knew i was a soldier,
    Who was wounded in the war,
    But i had to rise up,
    To conquer this war,

    Now i m all fine,
    And risen on my feet,
    Im all rarin to go,
    To face life's scorchin heat,

    No matter how things become worse,
    Now i wont care,
    I'll surely rebuild the citadel,
    And this time,
    Without any wear and tear....
    #iR@ and CrYpTiC_angel like this.
  3. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    wow abhi, i had no idea u could write so well!!

    reps :)
  4. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    wouldn't it be better if the contest were based on a certain theme so a comparison might actually be easier?
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    ^^yes, i said that in the other thread, i'm kinda workin on that... gimme a few days.
  6. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    yaar cryptu, i had written tht wen i was really bashed up in my life at a given point............thx.... :beer:
  7. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e <3V/S<3 50 CeNt$

    abhi sahi poem ahay mitra ;).............i hope things r know with u ..............
  8. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    Death riders

    every night, the men fell down,
    at 12 o clock the cannnons blowed
    ninght after night agony grew
    as the death riders ran in dark leaving shadows

    their children gerw with the guns
    they never knew how to love
    their last aim was only the land now
    they would kill, and get killed for it

    everyday the slayed the innocent people
    sacrificing their people they said its for their lord
    but, the didnt know how many heads would remain
    still they fought everday and night to get there

    think twice before you move
    in this battlefeild you cant undo
    one you are in it tehers no way out
    the death riders will run leaving shadows

    shadows of hatred
    shadows of pain
    shadows of sorrow
    the death riders will run through your head
    #iR@ likes this.
  9. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    one more .......

    Lord's fierce anger

    She sealed with seven seals, screamed
    Thou art worthy,For thy pleasure we are here,
    seven lamps of fire burning before my throne
    Come up hither, and I will show thee things,

    No man in heaven, earth, under the earth
    Worthier is the Lamb that was slain to thee
    Destroy this temple, three days I will raise it up
    the day cometh, that shall burn as an oven;

    and all the proud, yea,
    and all that do wickedly, shall be stubble:
    and the day that cometh shall burn them up
    And ye shall tread down the wicked;
    for they shall be ashes,
    under the soles of your feet

    out of the throne proceeded lightnings and thunderings and voices
    beasts full of eyes before and behind.
    a sea of glass like unto crystal:

    The peaceful meadows will be laid waste
    Like a lion he will leave his lair,
    land will become desolate
    Of the sword of the oppressor, Lord's fierce anger
  10. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    one more from me::


    Life is short,
    Life is sweet,
    But hes the one,
    U l surely meet.

    He will come like a stranger,
    On ur door,
    And when u will experience him,
    U can find him a bore.

    He l lay a bait,
    For which u can hardly wait,
    U wanna know this stranger,
    He is called FATE.

    { laughin strictly prohibited even if u din like the poem }
  11. Ali Akber

    Ali Akber New Member

    All of the above r good and abhi writes the best
    ok now lets make the contest end on 31st january...then we will decide who wins and see the ones with the best comments
  12. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    arey bhai ther r better poets thn me here...wait for some time..hmm..heres one more..


    First day i walked the stairs
    In the college of engineerin
    The dreams i carried along
    Wht 4 yrs they wer gonna be.

    It started from day one
    The lecturers pissing the mind
    No mercy for more poor brain ,
    At the end of each day
    It was nowher to find..

    The same thing followed each day
    Same rooms and same bore
    The only things of hope wer
    The discman and the match ka score

    Then arrive the fests
    this is the brightest part of the course
    All the CUTIES of the college,
    Seem to pop up from nowhere

    OOPS!! its the dreaded word - submissions
    The pen races faster than the mind
    to complete the assignments on time

    ASSIGNMENTS-never written on own
    Ther is always a pyscho
    Who always keeps his pen down
    his assignments can be found throughout the town.. ( xerox)

    Finally its time for exam
    this is wen we engineers start study,
    Until the timetable is fixed
    There is no hurry...

    Vacs start and i sit home
    Loggin to IGT all alone
    Its three and half yrs in the process
    Another half year in this mess

    All i have to say is-
    Engineering is a big bore..
    mark my words..
    ENGINEERIN IS A BIG BORE !!!!!!!!!!!

    {{ PLZ DON HIT UR PC IF U DIN LIKE THIS POEM }} And don swear.....
  13. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    Dude ... u'll know how mu8ch better that is once u start working ... esp in IT industry ...
    Lemme know when u join .. and tell me that u hate engg .......
    just 2 yrs i am bugged ... imagine being here for rest of ur life !
    Job sucks bigtime ... we dont know much about wht we want ! in Engg u know u have to score so much and crap like that ........
  14. ElysiaN

    ElysiaN d@Rk\/\/@|\|deReR

    awesome work guys....reps for u abhi... :rockon:
  15. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    Not many intrested i guess ! only some 3 entries till now !
  16. uj_6string

    uj_6string Nickelodean Addict :D

    what is the deadline to submit the poem???
  17. Nanda

    Nanda Bassist

    Read his earlier post ... it says ... 31st JAN .........
  18. Ali Akber

    Ali Akber New Member

    ya it is 31st jan
    there has been only 4-5 poems over here...wat abt the rest of u?just participate with anything u hav
  19. Ali Akber

    Ali Akber New Member

    yaar no posts since 6th jan...anyone else iterested ya jo 2 log hai woh he jeetey?
  20. #iR@


    nice poems there abhi and nanda! :) uuummmmmm.... still wondering if i should give any of my poems eventhough most ppl say they r more like lyrics but nahhhhh... i don't think soo... i am looking forward to reading the best lyrics! :) anyway... reps comming ur way abhi and nanda... good job u guys! :)

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