This game has been revised. now write ur own lyrics/peom and post it here 4000 points for first prize 2500 2nd prize 1000 3rd prize send if entrested[]
lemme start this one.....this is my best poem ive ever written coz its related to my personal life....... THE CITADEL Wen the wind was dull, And the sky was low, In my life,there was no flow. It felt like, FATE had given me a huge blow. Amidst the clouds of darkness, There came the rays of hope, I knew i had to win, Even wen there was no scope. Frustration seemed to come in, Like an uninvited guest, Success was like a stranger, Who had been put to rest. But it was the belief within, Tht seemed to tell, Hey why r u livin, Like a citadel tht fell. I knew i was a soldier, Who was wounded in the war, But i had to rise up, To conquer this war, Now i m all fine, And risen on my feet, Im all rarin to go, To face life's scorchin heat, No matter how things become worse, Now i wont care, I'll surely rebuild the citadel, And this time, Without any wear and tear....
wouldn't it be better if the contest were based on a certain theme so a comparison might actually be easier?
yaar cryptu, i had written tht wen i was really bashed up in my life at a given point............thx.... :beer:
Death riders every night, the men fell down, at 12 o clock the cannnons blowed ninght after night agony grew as the death riders ran in dark leaving shadows their children gerw with the guns they never knew how to love their last aim was only the land now they would kill, and get killed for it everyday the slayed the innocent people sacrificing their people they said its for their lord but, the didnt know how many heads would remain still they fought everday and night to get there think twice before you move in this battlefeild you cant undo one you are in it tehers no way out the death riders will run leaving shadows shadows of hatred shadows of pain shadows of sorrow the death riders will run through your head
one more ....... Lord's fierce anger She sealed with seven seals, screamed Thou art worthy,For thy pleasure we are here, seven lamps of fire burning before my throne Come up hither, and I will show thee things, No man in heaven, earth, under the earth Worthier is the Lamb that was slain to thee Destroy this temple, three days I will raise it up the day cometh, that shall burn as an oven; and all the proud, yea, and all that do wickedly, shall be stubble: and the day that cometh shall burn them up And ye shall tread down the wicked; for they shall be ashes, under the soles of your feet out of the throne proceeded lightnings and thunderings and voices beasts full of eyes before and behind. Lion, Calf Man eagle a sea of glass like unto crystal: The peaceful meadows will be laid waste Like a lion he will leave his lair, land will become desolate Of the sword of the oppressor, Lord's fierce anger
one more from me:: THE STRANGER Life is short, Life is sweet, But hes the one, U l surely meet. He will come like a stranger, On ur door, And when u will experience him, U can find him a bore. He l lay a bait, For which u can hardly wait, U wanna know this stranger, He is called FATE. { laughin strictly prohibited even if u din like the poem }
All of the above r good and abhi writes the best ok now lets make the contest end on 31st january...then we will decide who wins and see the ones with the best comments
arey bhai ther r better poets thn me here...wait for some time..hmm..heres one more.. DARKNESS OF ENGINEERING First day i walked the stairs In the college of engineerin The dreams i carried along Wht 4 yrs they wer gonna be. It started from day one The lecturers pissing the mind No mercy for more poor brain , At the end of each day It was nowher to find.. The same thing followed each day Same rooms and same bore The only things of hope wer The discman and the match ka score Then arrive the fests this is the brightest part of the course All the CUTIES of the college, Seem to pop up from nowhere OOPS!! its the dreaded word - submissions The pen races faster than the mind to complete the assignments on time ASSIGNMENTS-never written on own Ther is always a pyscho Who always keeps his pen down his assignments can be found throughout the town.. ( xerox) Finally its time for exam this is wen we engineers start study, Until the timetable is fixed There is no hurry... Vacs start and i sit home Loggin to IGT all alone Its three and half yrs in the process Another half year in this mess All i have to say is- Engineering is a big bore.. mark my words.. ENGINEERIN IS A BIG BORE !!!!!!!!!!! {{ PLZ DON HIT UR PC IF U DIN LIKE THIS POEM }} And don swear.....
Dude ... u'll know how mu8ch better that is once u start working ... esp in IT industry ... Lemme know when u join .. and tell me that u hate engg ....... just 2 yrs i am bugged ... imagine being here for rest of ur life ! Job sucks bigtime ... we dont know much about wht we want ! in Engg u know u have to score so much and crap like that ........
ya it is 31st jan there has been only 4-5 poems over here...wat abt the rest of u?just participate with anything u hav
nice poems there abhi and nanda! uuummmmmm.... still wondering if i should give any of my poems eventhough most ppl say they r more like lyrics but nahhhhh... i don't think soo... i am looking forward to reading the best lyrics! anyway... reps comming ur way abhi and nanda... good job u guys!
