lup dub..lub dub ...lub..!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Feb 27, 2009.

  1. lup dub..lub dub ...lub..!


    cuddled, not knowing each others name
    miles apart sharing a fake be-homeness
    deep eyes to dwell thick lips to comfort
    playing with their toy call aloness

    last time he was orion
    and aurora ws she, long skirts
    its a bubblegum dream if so
    they punched it dosent hurts

    ahh those valleys and dips of hers
    he licks, her joys & tears
    his nudes hide her anxious spots
    his rigour, she bears

    cuddled, not knowing each others name
    sharing that poetic cloneness
    the lup-dup one side will slowly sleep
    being watched by caging aloneness


    you never listen to me
    so dont ask some stupid where & kab
    come true or its will go to sleep
    my lub dub.. lub dub... lub...!

    ^ i didnt get all of it fully :p myself !!
  2. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    I don't care what it means. I love the images it creates in my head.

    this is not short i suppose !!
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    nice lub dub.......n why's the last para separate?
  5. ^ the last para is for myself..!
    thanks for the glance.
  6. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^so ur lub dub went to sleep?or not?
  7. ^its been long takes times ...!
  8. diya diya nadi ko
    lehar liye chall di
    doobana to hai hi
    koi deer koi jaldi

    good luck !
  9. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    who's gonna die//?><<

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