love's suicide....

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by jaycee, Aug 15, 2005.

  1. jaycee

    jaycee New Member

    Love’s suicide

    Here I am
    I am letting go
    Let graffiti do the work
    Looking back to the clear things which where killing me…
    Trough the seconds I want to know
    And see the things which wont let go, I had it all
    Suddenly it burdens me, how much the love was filling me
    I lost the faith, I had the love… When I made my jump

    Chores:
    I made myself our love’s suicide
    Now I realize we where one
    The blurry sight becomes a clear view
    Now your alone
    I made our love’s suicide
    Now I realize we where one….oh one!
    Oh please,

    I love the way you look today
    I want to touch you,
    you turn away.......mhhmhh
    I slowly move out of your life
    You cant see me, I am your history…but I’ll try
    Still I try, your attention I need
    I don’t know why…
    This road I lead without you is no need
    Just come to me

    Chores:
    I am sorry for our love’s suicide
    Now I realize we where one
    The blurry sight becomes a clear view
    Now your alone
    I am sorry for our love’s suicide
    Now I realize we where one….oh one!
    Oh please, I love you oh please let me touch you
    Auh auh aaauh auh auha ahuaha (2x)

    Guitar:------------------solo

    Well when I opened my eyes
    Everything was gone
    My life was gone without a reason
    I made a turn a one way turn
    Cant go back, I’m killing her
    I’m sorry please forgive,
    but don’t forget me
    I love you, don’t cry everything will be alright
    I’ll be near you,….guide you trough the sea of life

    Chores: (2singers)
    I made myself our love’s suicide
    Now I realize we where one
    The blurry sight becomes a clear view
    Now your alone
    I made our love’s suicide
    Now I realize we where one….oh one!
    Oh please, I love you oh please let me touch you
    Auh auh aaauh auh auha ahuaha
     
  2. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    no music for this one???
     
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    lyrix of some song??.. ^ :think: which1?
     
  4. jaycee

    jaycee New Member

    my one:
    Love’s suicide (description) :(man on a building, jumping to escape love)


    INTRO:(D Dsus2)x2 Bm G A D

    VERSE 1
    bm
    Here I am I am letting go. Let graffiti do all the work
    g (D Dsus2)x2
    Looking back to the clear things which where killing me…
    Bm
    Trough the seconds I want to know
    G D Dsus2
    And see the things which wont let go,
    A d
    I had it all
    bm
    Suddenly it burdens me,
    G D Dsus2(only one time)
    how much the love was filling me
    bm g (let ring)
    I lost the faith, I had the love… When I made my jump

    Chores:
    D a
    I made myself our love’s suicide
    Bm g
    Now I realize we were one
    A
    The blurry sight becomes a clear view
    g
    Now your alone
    D a
    I made our love’s suicide
    Bm g (let ring)
    Now I realize we were one….oh one!
    G
    Oh please,


    INTERLUDE: (D Dsus2)x2 Bm G A D

    VERSE 2

    bm
    I love the way you look today
    G (D Dsus2)x2
    I want to touch you,

    bm
    you turn away.......mhhmhh
    G D Dsus2
    I slowly move out of your life
    A d
    You cant see me, I am your history…but I’ll try
    bm
    Still I try, your attention I need
    G D Dsus2(only one time)
    I don’t know why…

    bm
    This road I lead without you is no need
    G (let it ring)
    Just come to me

    Chores:

    D a
    I’m sorry for our love’s suicide
    Bm g
    Now I realize we were one
    A
    The blurry sight becomes a clear view
    g
    Now your alone
    D a
    I’m sorry for our love’s suicide
    Bm g (let ring)
    Now I realize we were one….oh one!

    BRIDGE & SOLO: (Bm G D Dsus2 D)x6
    Oh please, I love you oh please let me touch you
    Auh auh aaauh auh auha ahuaha (4x)

    bm
    Well when I opened my eyes
    G (d dsus2) 2x
    Everything was gone
    bm
    My life was gone without a reason
    G d dsus2
    I made a turn a one way turn
    A d
    Cant go back, I’m killing her
    G d dsus2 ( only one time)
    I’m sorry please forgive,
    bm
    but don’t forget me
    A d
    I love you, don’t cry everything will be alright
    G (let it ring )
    I’ll be near you,….guide you trough the sea of life


    Chores: (2singers)

    Chores:
    D a
    I made myself our love’s suicide
    Bm g
    Now I realize we were one
    a
    The blurry sight becomes a clear view
    g
    Now your alone
    D a
    I made our love’s suicide
    Bm g (let ring)
    Now I realize we were one….oh one!


    OUTRO:(D Dsus2)x2 (Bm G A D)x2


    knock your self out....
     
  5. jaycee

    jaycee New Member

    i only put my own song on here...that is on my demo CD....
     
  6. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    il ike the chord prog ...
    almost reminds me of a dude i met in bangalore ... who had created his own compostions ...
     
  7. jaycee

    jaycee New Member

    do u have any nice chord prog.???
     
  8. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    whoa...nice stuff.....can u upload ur song smwhere....if u donr mind of-course
     
  9. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    i just "doodle" on my guitar ...
    so actually i dont have any personal chord progressions ...

    mebbe thats y i like any prog that sounds good ... :grin:
     
  10. jaycee

    jaycee New Member

    hehe okay....so which guitar do u have? anywayz if u dont mind me askin
    (Msg for ssslayer)
     
  11. jaycee

    jaycee New Member

    no not yet but ill try to put it on so you can upload it....i have some other good songs ill put them on l8er.... But I g2g, i have band practice see ya ( msg for cypher)
     
  12. cYpHeR

    cYpHeR Banned

    okie sure....
     
  13. ssslayer

    ssslayer Banned

    i have one givson electric (dont ask me which model - some crappy low-end having single coils - and a dysfunctional tremolo arm) ...

    but since i have a processor and Marshall it sounds pretty nice ...
    but then i really am just a dillitante, a dabbler ... so i am not proficient in any aspect of guitar playing :grin: ... neither proficient in any song ...

    hey how can i mind delving out all this ... thats what this website is there for ... aint it?
     
  14. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    nice gus stuff over all!i liked very much!

    @quoted - was that a tune or was it some horny act? :p:
     
  15. jaycee

    jaycee New Member

    (msg for ssslayer) oyeah ive got a givson 2....

    and a ibanez, fender, silvertone, stagg, a GB&A and morris:p

    hehe im a collecter and a guitar freak....

    haha:p....yeah i think so 2
     
  16. jaycee

    jaycee New Member

    haha no first it was a horny act...and then is became a tune:p haha no just kidding....so you like the song or?????(rocking_devil)
     
  17. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    yeah i liked it!it seems to be that u are good lyricist!

    i too write lyrics......the early ones are crap sh!t and will have you dead of laughter then it got better and now im at my best.but i need sometime to put up all my ideas in the right place make it perfect! :rule:
     

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