Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by rockboyteek, Feb 16, 2005.

  1. rockboyteek

    rockboyteek New Member

    hey this is a poem i did in my english lesson, it was work so it aint that good

    The stormy winds hitting you aggresively.
    The unpleasent pain of an empty heart.
    The heavy chain keeping you still,
    leaving you in distress and pain.
    The bitter taste left on your lips.
    The same picture infront of your eyes.
    The hurting sound of empty space,
    making you notice there's no one around.
    The beautiful smell
    that no longer lasted.
    My hurting hearted can no long take,
    the love she gave was always fake.

    so hope u like it anyway :rockon:
    Subhro likes this.
  2. browneyegurlie

    browneyegurlie Sweet as Honey

    bro this ones ace keep it up:)
  3. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    It's a nice poem dude. Keep posting more poems.
  4. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    :) :) tht rockd :) :) rockyboy.. reps 4 ya :)

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