Love....?????

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by angelden20, Sep 22, 2005.

  1. angelden20

    angelden20 New Member

    In Love,
    Some of us fall by the wayside,
    Some soars to the stars,
    And some sail through troubles;
    And some have to live with scars,
    This is Love..... Love and Love.............




    What say????
     
  2. shaks

    shaks New Member

    nice............are these your own words..........if yes then bravo
     
  3. angelden20

    angelden20 New Member

    Hey

    Hey shaks............ my own words........
     
  4. shaks

    shaks New Member

    that is goooooooooooooooood...............i really wonder people writing all this...........how intellectual u people are..............
     
  5. Gravity_defies

    Gravity_defies New Member

    nice....short n sweet.....
     
  6. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    umm.. its too short man..y dont u try and add more words to it to make it more emphatic
     
  7. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    however....a nice effort nonetheless :grin:
     
  8. angelden20

    angelden20 New Member

    May be u can help vini.......... add somethin to my poem if u want to..............:goof:
     
  9. angelden20

    angelden20 New Member

    :)

    Thanks Gravity................. I need the insipiration.............
     
  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM



    Elton John Could help u!


    Circle of life : Lion King

    From the day we arrive on the planet
    And blinking, step into the sun
    There's more to be seen than can ever be seen
    More to do than can ever be done

    Some say eat or be eaten
    Some say live and let live
    But all are agreed as they join the stampede
    You should never take more than you give

    Chorus:
    In the Circle of Life
    It's the wheel of fortune
    It's the leap of faith
    It's the band of hope
    Till we find our place
    On the path unwinding
    In the Circle, the Circle of Life

    Some of us fall by the wayside
    And some of us soar to the stars
    And some of us sail through our troubles
    And some have to live with the scars


    There's far too much to take in here
    More to find than can ever be found
    But the sun rolling high
    Through the sapphire sky
    Keeps the great and small on the endless round

    [chorus]

    On the path unwinding
    In the Circle, the Circle of Life.

    http://www.lionking.org/~whitewlf/lyrics/l-circleoflife-ej.html
     
  11. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    angeldon20, u r busted!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    now, is that ur lyrics for sure......
     
  12. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Of course it aint her/his poem
    she'd sue Elton John otherwise :p: hehe
     
  13. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening



    haha, I love you.




    No, I really do. You are now the proud owner of all the points I have in the bank.
     
  14. dharmatma

    dharmatma Banned

    maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaannnnnnnn....buahahahahahhahahaahahhaahahahahhahahahahahahahaahhahahahahaahhaha...

    i love bubbly martini more than bjr.
     
  15. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening



    Impossible. I just gave her 45000 points...and we all know there is not better way of proclaiming love over this materialistic world we call the internet.
     
  16. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    **cough cough**
    hahahahaha
    **cough cough**
    hahahaha

    nice rhyming eh?:)
    well i jus couldnt stop laughing at this... and coughing..hehe.. therefor the "poetic metre"

    Anyways
    The main thing here is
    Finally you'll said it Bjr and Dharmatma!!!
    what took you'll so long??.. :p:.. (kidding)

    and Bjr i dont need your points dude
    the gesture is appreciated though;)
     
  17. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening



    Thank goodness....I'd lied anyway :rule:
     
  18. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    OMG ... how could i miss this thread?

    NICE POEM angelden ... nice one ...
     
  19. Rude_gal:)

    Rude_gal:) New Member

    Oh my God...we have some Bappi Lehri & Anu Malik aswell here...who do the chori of songs..
    By the way @Den..(wont call u an Angel...cos u dont seem one)...nice thinking ..'a lil' stanza from a song..so that no one cud figure out wat it is.....but thanx bubbly...for putting some lite on here..
    Good job bubbly
     
  20. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ angel.......BUSTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :aggre:
     

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