hello!!!!!!! JUST ROTE THIS POEM IN 5 mins! i know is a little late cause mothers day gone but still i rote it cause i was free today! MUST READ MAN! i think its one of the deepest works i have done... and yes the ones who r really close to their mom as in REALLY REALLY REALLYYYYYYYY close they might cry... ok ok.... ITNI BHI ACHI NAHI HAI...: but chalo i'll leave that up to u guys to decide! here goes... LOVE YA MOM! Ppl say jewels r precious But they r hard to gain as they can only be bought But they all r mistaken I don’t want them For ur tears r my jewels mom… So precious; I don’t want u to waste them! Ppl say money is everything As it can buy the world But they r all mistaken I don’t want it For your smile is my money mom… It is worth all the luxuries in life! Ppl say emotions r ur weaknesses As they can buy u But they r all mistaken I live for them For emotions are our bond mom… They can help me attain success! Ppl say paradise can only be thought Or imagined of But they r all mistaken For my paradise is ur hug mom! Ppl say life is painful And unjust But they r all mistaken For my life is U MOM… Peaceful and soothing! I love u! THANKS A TONNNNNN for reading.... HOPE U GUYS LOVED IT and it remineded u guys of some AWESOME memories... i think if i did that then i think i have done my job!
I love those lines!!!!!:beer: :beer: I was having some good talks with my mom also....really nice poem...hugs, and reps to you
welcome back (pesssh ur thread in the chit chat was closed) hmmmmmmm special poem for mothers day(HEY WHEN IS MOTHERS DAY???????)
@ angela... THX SIS!!! :nw: thx a LOT! means a LOT! @ spy_game... i know! :annoyed: didn;t even let me tell how my xam went! :aggre: ANYWAY.... thanks for reading... and IT WAS YESTERDAY! (and ppl say they love their moms!) hehe
@ anshephenomenon.... THX for reading man! @ babydoll.... thxxxxxx gurl! :beer: @ Garima.... yaar... ab mein kya kahoon i am SPEECHLESS! THANK U soo MUCH! :nw: :nw: :nw:
so sweet to say such to ur mom... even i was looking for some poem to dedicate my mom.. all i found was this... A villanelle for Mother's Day Should take me just about an hour: Writing it is child's play. Because I know just what to say, And rhyming's quite within my power, To write it should be child's play. Yet plain speech is not my way: I look for leaves to shade my flower, This villanelle for Mother's Day. I do not wish to sound too fey, Obscure, mystic, gushy, sour-- Arggh! Writing's never child's play! Yes, childish! To my dismay, Far beyond the allotted hour, This villanelle for Mother's Day Dawdles on. Let me just say It plain: I love you, and so end our Villanelle for Mother's Day. (Well … writing it was child's play.)
so sweet to say such to ur mom... even i was looking for some poem to dedicate my mom.. all i found was this... A villanelle for Mother's Day Should take me just about an hour: Writing it is child's play. Because I know just what to say, And rhyming's quite within my power, To write it should be child's play. Yet plain speech is not my way: I look for leaves to shade my flower, This villanelle for Mother's Day. I do not wish to sound too fey, Obscure, mystic, gushy, sour-- Arggh! Writing's never child's play! Yes, childish! To my dismay, Far beyond the allotted hour, This villanelle for Mother's Day Dawdles on. Let me just say It plain: I love you, and so end our Villanelle for Mother's Day. (Well … writing it was child's play.)
