Love is what I feel when I look at you Loved is what I feel when you look at me Its your eyes which make me feel that way There's so much care, affection and love They tell me more than you could ever say Words are less and feelings are more But what I feel for you is Love, for sure Be it day or night I think of you And when I tell this to my friends, they say," Tell us something new" This is a sheer madness I know But this is something for you to know Need is what I feel when I touch you Needed is what I feel when you touch me Its your touch which makes me feel that way There's so much care, affection and love It tells me more than you could ever say There's an ocean of emotions inside me To which, I wish you could ever see But there's one part of me, which doesn't want you to know That my love for you is as gentle as snow Cos you might misuse my love...you see And I'll be hurt like hell, as I believe you more than me
m sure u made this poem on ur own..it was very nice to read..mushy n all..way to go..keep postin more of ur stuff tahda!!
Love is a misunderstanding between 2 fools which some other fools admire through a foolish poem where a fool tries to define the foolish love in a extra foolish manner .. i hope all fools have identified themselves
errr .. .that was blunt but pragmatic ... but u cant help it ... it is instincts ... something that made your ancestors survive ... and that y we are here ...
Hey....thanks to all u peeps....who agree with the poem....& for those who don't....I hope u feel this 'foolish' feeling asap....then u wud come to kno Y this world is still surviving
Nice really nice $AINT, gr8 wrk,it explains every fools feeling.Reps for u _________________________________ Jeeta Hai Yeh Banda, Marne keliye ek din Jeeta Hai Yeh Banda, Marne keliye ek din Magar ye soch ke nahin marta, ke jeeta bhi hai koi uskeliye har din
too good $AINT ... u hv very practical approach.. just like me.. but yaar i will tell u sumthing abt love.. love is not sumthing which can be seen through eyes.. love is not sumthing which can be heard through whispers.. love is not sumthing which can be told through words.. love is not sumthing which can be written in letters.. love is a feeling that rises from one heart and reaches other.. love is a feeling which a sister shares with her brother.. love is a feeling which a kid shares with her mother.. love is a feeling which a boy shares with his father.. so next time when u define love keep all the things together.. beacause love is the glue which binds this world together.. :beer: vishwa sometimes poetic
Hey $aint dont try to b smart....read the whole poem...3rd para is for blind ppl....who cant SEE but TOUCH...(i hope u got the answer) And m not asking any1 to believe wat I believe....its just that 'this is wat I feel' ...ppl may or may NOT agree with me....no probs with that cos its not my problem 'if they dont agree' and anyways....even I DONT AGREE with wat they say hisaab barabar...
hey garima it was awesome!!!i cant understand how could some1 write a poem or a song on their own!!gosh i was told infact forced to do it by my girl and i got so frustrated..anyways u r good...also vishwaa is good..hey guys gimme some tips to write poems i wanna try it!!
WeLL dOne hey garima it was awesome!!!i cant understand how could some1 write a poem or a song on their own!!gosh i was told infact forced to do it by my girl and i got so frustrated..anyways u r good...also vishwaa is good..hey guys gimme some tips to write poems i wanna try it!!
LOVE is LOVE.. LOVE is a BLUFF.. LOVE is LIFE.. LOVE is KNIFE.. LOVE is GOOD.. LOVE is BAD.. LOVE is DEATH.. LOVE is THE END...
looks like every1 is getting a little poetic here..what an inspiration garima's poem has been..lolzzz :grin: tahda!!