Lost Love and Waiting

OK! Here's the deal...


I never thought, I would live my life without you.
I never thought, I would get by a single day.
I never thought, I would really lose you.
I never thought, I'd ever see this day.

Memories of you walk across my room,
Reminding me of all those happy days.
Tired of crying, worn of brooding,
Here I am lying on the floor,
Waiting to fall in love again.

My heart's mixed up, stuck in a corner,
Caught between yesterday and today.
My mind's jumled up, driven up the wall,
Caught between my dreams and reality.

Fantasies of who's to come,
Hopes of that dreamed one.
Haunted by the fear of being alone,
I tuck away to my corner,
and dream away.



Right on! This is something I came up with last afternoon. I was alone at home and bored out of my skull and was actually lying on the floor thinking about my ex-girlfriend when I started singing the first few lines from the top of my head. Got off the floor and gave it a more serious attempt.

I know the lyrics might not sound very original but I like singing it in a bluesy way.

Go on, people, trash me!

 

Don't know much abt lyrics... but its ur feelings... i wud likes to hear it.
So plsssss upload if possible

 

What?! Dude, seriously!

 

Actually..i like it. And im quite frank.

I love the second stanza. Its even more exceptional when you are trying to get over an ex fiance :cry1: Gives a more personal touch. Like someone knows exactly what you're going through..

Give it a shot.. upload the song if you're comfortable..

 

Well, I did record it on my phone while practicing it but I'm not sure if I shoul upload it... I've never been much into performing arts... but you never know, I might change my mind and decide to show off.

Thanks for your comment, though!

And thanks to you, too, amitri!

 

hey no need to thanks pal. But seriously give it a try

 

Tabs for Lost Love & Waiting

Awesome...Sometimes lonelyness reveals your inner thoughts into poems. I liked the lyrics so much, but unfortunately I cannot create the tabs for this. Maybe in the same tunes of Titanic, can someone post the tabs or email me j_karra@yahoo.com. I want to play this for some one special....
Thanks
Sastry.

 

Kk..it's mostly a good write when people say this coz this generally happens when people write for themselves(n that is in fact what makes it better)..or sometimes the poem is so good that it sounds sarcastic (the line I mean)..Anyway..it IS good!First 4 lines..meh...fine..sorta introduction.The rest is good though.See,almost every poet writes on this topic every now and then..so it's hard to put in a new emotion that everyone feels but rarely writes..
so "Tired of crying, worn of brooding,
Here I am lying on the floor,
Waiting to fall in love again...kinda stood out (in a good sense)..loved the thought.The rest is well written again..but usual stuff...The end is pretty good..liked the reference to the "corner".All in all,it seems genuine.

 

Wow! Thanks, guys!!! Seriously!

Well, I was thinking about my ex when I started singing this and I am still single and considering the fact that it has been three years since I met someone, I guess, I just let it pour. Never thought of posting it anywhere till I joined this place.

Now I'm seriously considering uploading a recording.

 

lets listen to it
though the lines go smooth !

 

hold on for a while... I'm working on it...

 

AMazing i was at awe when i read ur lyrics im just wishing that with ur permission i could use this to make a song PLEASE !!!

 

OH im sry i didnt know u were working on it .! SRY!

 

Dude .. forget waiting to fall in love again.

The only way to get over a gal is get under one.

 

lol stupid 10 character limit

 

Why Do I Still Love You?

Why do I Still Love You?
Why do I cry
who do I hide
why do I still care
why do I pretend your there

why do I love you
why do I think you love me to
why do I feel pain
why do I feel like I’m insane

why do I want you so bad
why do I get mad
why do I miss you
why do I need you

I try to tell you how I feel
but you don't care
so I'm asking you these questions
to see if you know I’m there!
Coz I Still Love U

 

I was hoping the answers to all the why's would be a little less obvious.

 

^^ LOL
:shock: amen.

 

first para is lil too repetitive, else looks good except for few word spells.

 

Me..........Just Alone

Darkness is with night
the moon with the moon light
the roses with a thorn
the sunlight with the dawn
clouds with the rain
a heart always with pain
the leaves with tree
the shore is with sea
a boat with a stream
and a sleep with a dream
heat with summer
a rainbow with the colour
tears with eyes
stars with the sky
fragrance with the air
love with care
poetry with rhyme
tide with time
even a dog with the bone
and me.........just alone