OK! Here's the deal... I never thought, I would live my life without you. I never thought, I would get by a single day. I never thought, I would really lose you. I never thought, I'd ever see this day. Memories of you walk across my room, Reminding me of all those happy days. Tired of crying, worn of brooding, Here I am lying on the floor, Waiting to fall in love again. My heart's mixed up, stuck in a corner, Caught between yesterday and today. My mind's jumled up, driven up the wall, Caught between my dreams and reality. Fantasies of who's to come, Hopes of that dreamed one. Haunted by the fear of being alone, I tuck away to my corner, and dream away. Right on! This is something I came up with last afternoon. I was alone at home and bored out of my skull and was actually lying on the floor thinking about my ex-girlfriend when I started singing the first few lines from the top of my head. Got off the floor and gave it a more serious attempt. I know the lyrics might not sound very original but I like singing it in a bluesy way. Go on, people, trash me!
Don't know much abt lyrics... but its ur feelings... i wud likes to hear it. So plsssss upload if possible
Actually..i like it. And im quite frank. I love the second stanza. Its even more exceptional when you are trying to get over an ex fiance :cry1: Gives a more personal touch. Like someone knows exactly what you're going through.. Give it a shot.. upload the song if you're comfortable..
Well, I did record it on my phone while practicing it but I'm not sure if I shoul upload it... I've never been much into performing arts... but you never know, I might change my mind and decide to show off. Thanks for your comment, though! And thanks to you, too, amitri!
Tabs for Lost Love & Waiting Awesome...Sometimes lonelyness reveals your inner thoughts into poems. I liked the lyrics so much, but unfortunately I cannot create the tabs for this. Maybe in the same tunes of Titanic, can someone post the tabs or email me j_karra@yahoo.com. I want to play this for some one special.... Thanks Sastry.
Kk..it's mostly a good write when people say this coz this generally happens when people write for themselves(n that is in fact what makes it better)..or sometimes the poem is so good that it sounds sarcastic (the line I mean)..Anyway..it IS good!First 4 lines..meh...fine..sorta introduction.The rest is good though.See,almost every poet writes on this topic every now and then..so it's hard to put in a new emotion that everyone feels but rarely writes.. so "Tired of crying, worn of brooding, Here I am lying on the floor, Waiting to fall in love again...kinda stood out (in a good sense)..loved the thought.The rest is well written again..but usual stuff...The end is pretty good..liked the reference to the "corner".All in all,it seems genuine.
Wow! Thanks, guys!!! Seriously! Well, I was thinking about my ex when I started singing this and I am still single and considering the fact that it has been three years since I met someone, I guess, I just let it pour. Never thought of posting it anywhere till I joined this place. Now I'm seriously considering uploading a recording.
AMazing i was at awe when i read ur lyrics im just wishing that with ur permission i could use this to make a song PLEASE !!!
Why Do I Still Love You? Why do I Still Love You? Why do I cry who do I hide why do I still care why do I pretend your there why do I love you why do I think you love me to why do I feel pain why do I feel like I’m insane why do I want you so bad why do I get mad why do I miss you why do I need you I try to tell you how I feel but you don't care so I'm asking you these questions to see if you know I’m there! Coz I Still Love U
Me..........Just Alone Darkness is with night the moon with the moon light the roses with a thorn the sunlight with the dawn clouds with the rain a heart always with pain the leaves with tree the shore is with sea a boat with a stream and a sleep with a dream heat with summer a rainbow with the colour tears with eyes stars with the sky fragrance with the air love with care poetry with rhyme tide with time even a dog with the bone and me.........just alone