Lost Innocence

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by ronnieanand, Oct 22, 2005.

  1. ronnieanand

    ronnieanand n00bier th@n th0u

    Okay. First time I am gonna post here. I cannot write anything, not even a good leave letter. I scribbled a few in my school days and college days. Forgive the follies of my youth :eek:: . :annoyed: This one's called Lost Innocence.

    Lost Innocence

    Wings of desire embare me
    Shadows Of Ignorance
    I can feel upon me
    Bright Light Shines
    But Ignorance Blinds

    Caught In the clutches
    Innocence built Sand Castles of Love
    Built to be destroyed
    By the Winds of Time

    That innocence Lost
    Lost Forever
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    hey.. leave letters, even i cant write :p:

    But ur poem aint bad! in fact, it's good.....

    Good one..

    do post more...
  3. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    its short n precise dude....good work!

    but it still making me laugh somewhere:RollLol:
  4. jekyll

    jekyll Banned

    better off writing leave letters n resignation letters :p:
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Hey Ronnie thats a nice poem!!
    i like the stanza

    "Innocence built Sand Castles of Love
    Built to be destroyed
    By the Winds of Time"

    i think it'l sound nice if you make a song out of it..
    you arent bad by the way

    Pssst....start making the leave letters more interesting by adding your poetic talent to it.. ;)

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