Okay. First time I am gonna post here. I cannot write anything, not even a good leave letter. I scribbled a few in my school days and college days. Forgive the follies of my youth : . :annoyed: This one's called Lost Innocence. Lost Innocence -------------------- Wings of desire embare me Shadows Of Ignorance I can feel upon me Bright Light Shines But Ignorance Blinds Caught In the clutches Innocence built Sand Castles of Love Built to be destroyed By the Winds of Time That innocence Lost Lost Forever
hey.. leave letters, even i cant write : But ur poem aint bad! in fact, it's good..... Good one.. do post more...
Hey Ronnie thats a nice poem!! i like the stanza "Innocence built Sand Castles of Love Built to be destroyed By the Winds of Time" i think it'l sound nice if you make a song out of it.. you arent bad by the way Pssst....start making the leave letters more interesting by adding your poetic talent to it..