Losing Myself

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by ~Bish, Jul 17, 2007.

  1. ~Bish

    ~Bish The Illusionist

    Hi All,

    Looks are deceptive
    Life is just a perspective
    Slowly dies in one corner
    Bastard! who is this souls owner

    The pain that grows within
    the incapability to rest in
    tremors of illusion
    wake him up in the nights

    trying hard to resist
    giving up evrything to persist
    He is strong enough to hold it
    but weak enough to reveal it

    Thinking about the angel
    which will make his soul heal
    Lost is one soul
    Lost is the feel

    Like a tired soldier
    gives up the weapons
    Shouts at the dark night
    Kill me before they kill me

    Hatred is the only thing
    he can offer anyone
    Destruction is the only action
    he can perform all alone

    Don't come near him
    He may bite
    Don't wake him up
    He may fight

    Dies a soul.. slowly slowly
    Can see him drowning in the
    ocean of love..

    nimisha and madhuresh like this.
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    oye great effort yaar !
  3. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    i can understand the feel.. hang on sweetheart!
  4. #iR@


    u r pretty good at poetry man... and dont worry! just take care.... *smiles*
  5. Angira

    Angira New Member

    It is a beautiful Poem, indeed
  6. Rude_gal:)

    Rude_gal:) New Member

    Maturity reflects… keep writing…this was a good one…
  7. fairandlovely

    fairandlovely peeka-boo

    Nice. It tends to drag a little at places but ends beautifully. Are you making a song out of it?

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