Look What You've Done

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by CrYpTiC_angel, Oct 4, 2005.

  1. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Hey all,
    these are just some thoughts outta my head....

    Look What You've Done

    I can taste my tears
    Thought they'd be salty
    But they turned out to be bitter

    I can smell the fear
    You instilled in me
    I'm paranoid

    I scream out aloud
    But no one seems to hear me
    Is this for real?

    I hurt inside
    Am I bleeding
    'Coz I can taste blood now

    I feel weak
    Since you took all my strength
    And left me out alone to die

    I'm confused
    Wasn't this love?
    Or was I mistaken?

    I rot inside
    But outside I smile
    You turned me unreal

    I still breathe
    But look what you've done
    You've killed me...
  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^nice one...yet again some1 went thru a heart break i guess :hbr:
    Dont worry Angel....Life goes on........
  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    and cryptu makes way..dashes out yet another poem and impresses me yet again..
    lend me ur head..brain to be precise for just a day..

    PS-btw..m still groping around to write a poem..cant seem to get a clue what to write about.. :think: iL keep thinking anyway :think: :think: :think:

    atta girl..keep ur poems flowing in :)
  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    ^ i'll bruise my chin.. wont i?

    cripes..m talkin rubbish now :shock: sorry :p:
  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Yeah, i know... as forrest gump wud say it "s.hit happens"
    but no worries!! life isnt bad otherwise...
    anyways, thnx
  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    u make me look like a genius.. lol
  7. bobbit_uncut

    bobbit_uncut Banned

    dont tell me yuo have actually been through all that :shock:
  8. hate_eternal

    hate_eternal Banned

    Nice, but sad. I like your stuff keep posting more.
  9. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    well, yeah but it's kinda exaggerated here, of course. i mean, i couldn't actually TASTE blood. crap question 2 ask. :phbbt:


  10. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    i have tasted blood sometime back......very often now n then....when i had da habit of biting lips......i used to suck up all the lil blood that came out!:grin:
  11. Rude_gal:)

    Rude_gal:) New Member

    ^^^^:shock: crazy :shock:
    anyways...nice poem Angel..(u seem one ;))
  12. #iR@


    nice work angel......... keep em comming....... :beer:
  13. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    I'm out of words...

    the poems jus perfect...

    :shock: ** swallows a lump in the throat**

    **A Big..... HUGE hug babe**

    wont say everything will be alright..coz i know i'l take time :eek::
    Be Strong..
    Loads of Love

  14. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    @rude_gal, #IR@

    thnx a lot..


    thnx for d hug, i feel better already :)

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