Look What You've Done

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by CrYpTiC_angel, Oct 4, 2005.

  1. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Hey all,
    these are just some thoughts outta my head....

    Look What You've Done

    I can taste my tears
    Thought they'd be salty
    But they turned out to be bitter

    I can smell the fear
    You instilled in me
    I'm paranoid

    I scream out aloud
    But no one seems to hear me
    Is this for real?

    I hurt inside
    Am I bleeding
    'Coz I can taste blood now

    I feel weak
    Since you took all my strength
    And left me out alone to die

    I'm confused
    Wasn't this love?
    Or was I mistaken?

    I rot inside
    But outside I smile
    You turned me unreal

    I still breathe
    But look what you've done
    You've killed me...
     
    CrYpTiC_angel, Oct 4, 2005
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  2. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^^nice one...yet again some1 went thru a heart break i guess :hbr:
    Dont worry Angel....Life goes on........
     
    Garima, Oct 4, 2005
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  3. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    and cryptu makes way..dashes out yet another poem and impresses me yet again..
    lend me ur head..brain to be precise for just a day..


    PS-btw..m still groping around to write a poem..cant seem to get a clue what to write about.. :think: iL keep thinking anyway :think: :think: :think:

    atta girl..keep ur poems flowing in :)
     
    vini, Oct 4, 2005
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  4. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    ^ i'll bruise my chin.. wont i?

    cripes..m talkin rubbish now :shock: sorry :p:
     
    vini, Oct 4, 2005
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  5. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    Yeah, i know... as forrest gump wud say it "s.hit happens"
    but no worries!! life isnt bad otherwise...
    anyways, thnx
     
    CrYpTiC_angel, Oct 4, 2005
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  6. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    @vini
    u make me look like a genius.. lol
    thnx!!
     
    CrYpTiC_angel, Oct 4, 2005
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  7. bobbit_uncut

    bobbit_uncut Banned

    :RollLol:
    dont tell me yuo have actually been through all that :shock:
     
    bobbit_uncut, Oct 5, 2005
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  8. hate_eternal

    hate_eternal Banned

    Nice, but sad. I like your stuff keep posting more.
     
    hate_eternal, Oct 5, 2005
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  9. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    well, yeah but it's kinda exaggerated here, of course. i mean, i couldn't actually TASTE blood. crap question 2 ask. :phbbt:

    @hate_eternal

    thnx!
     
    CrYpTiC_angel, Oct 5, 2005
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  10. rocking_devil

    rocking_devil Banned

    i have tasted blood sometime back......very often now n then....when i had da habit of biting lips......i used to suck up all the lil blood that came out!:grin:
     
    rocking_devil, Oct 5, 2005
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  11. Rude_gal:)

    Rude_gal:) New Member

    ^^^^:shock: crazy :shock:
    anyways...nice poem Angel..(u seem one ;))
     
    Rude_gal:), Oct 5, 2005
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  12. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    nice work angel......... keep em comming....... :beer:
     
    #iR@, Oct 5, 2005
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  13. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    I'm out of words...

    the poems jus perfect...

    :shock: ** swallows a lump in the throat**

    **A Big..... HUGE hug babe**

    wont say everything will be alright..coz i know i'l take time :eek::
    Be Strong..
    Loads of Love

    Martina
     
    BubblyMartini, Oct 5, 2005
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  14. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    @rude_gal, #IR@

    thnx a lot..

    @martina

    thnx for d hug, i feel better already :)
     
    CrYpTiC_angel, Oct 5, 2005
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