All these while life's been just the same The words rhyme the same for you and me I know its the same quest for the same truth that keep us moving sleepless all the nights May be you know it too that we want the words to rhyme differently the sun to shine differently 'cause the color of the rainbow doesnt excite us anymore May be we've lost ourselves in ourselves and with that losing all that mattered like the fading color the silent words, the dreams and all the memories of you and me and everyone else So many but and so many ifs but still we dont know what the reason is indeed who's guilty after all you, me or someone else May be we should go back in time a little while into the past live there for some more time to know each other better to love each other more 'cause love seems to have forgotten the way today Its time we ask ourselves what are we running after what are we longing for what you want from me and what I want from you Its time we ask ourselves what is it all about 'cause life, will still be the same till we know what we're living without. ----------- Comments plz
^Set your poetry to music or atleast become a songwriter for some band. You're capable and deserving of such a position.
Well! Sorrry ... it sounded little like that to me , never mind and thanx for the praise bro .... its really inspiring ...
I loved your poem.. its simple and put forward beautifully do as Sarat says, my bro doesnt say that to people very often one line which i've loved the most is "'cause the color of the rainbow doesnt excite us anymore" and the rest is good too
@Garima ... thanx yaar... @Bubbs ... thanx a lot.. well,will think about wat sarat said, but it sure did inspire me a lot
powerful lines.... May be we've lost ourselves in ourselves and with that losing all that mattered very well done man ....best part is end tak u were with the thought line u started....
May be we should go back in time a little while into the past live there for some more time to know each other better simple beauty...
