little girl

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by madhuresh, Feb 25, 2006.

  1. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Pink frock, naive manners, eyes filled with fun
    The other day, came to my room, this little one

    as usual, went close, to my guitar
    Let me touch, i swear, not break the taar

    Caught her in a flash
    “Mummy ko ja ke bo lun gi”
    Raised my hand and innocently
    “Maroge to roo doon gi”

    left her, caught the idea, which led
    what I did and what she said……

    How many times, we adults, say this to thy
    Don't do this to me o lord, otherwise, i will cry

    haha this is called snaching a poetry fom a situation
    .:SpY_GaMe:. likes this.
  2. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    I see what you're driving at.......not an orthodox context, good work.
  3. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    this poem displays such innocence and i can identify this situation easily.....most naturalof all i have read till now.
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    @walk_alone was written by my avtar ;)
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    psst.......i like what that avatar's written;)

    i think i've told you something about your avatar..
    guess i'm losing my memory..:)

    its good dude..
    jus been introduced to fusion poem and i'm loving it:)
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    nah, kuch nahi bataya...phir se bataoo....
    sab sun na-lee isliye, pass aaoo !
    thanks :)
  7. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

  8. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    hey good poem madhuresh!!!

    what happened next?
  9. koolstrum

    koolstrum The Chosen One

    did sum budy call me. i guess sum1 said ways cool one madhuresh...
  10. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh yaadasht accha hona bhi buri cheej hoti hai ...aadmi kabhi naye sire se soochata hi nahi...
    @amit..HAHAHA i tought the girls a lesson chote bacche bahut badmaash ho gaye hain Tv dhek dekh kar....:)
    @kool ....yaar ye kooolll ka sala matlab kyaa hai....kukch accha karo to cool ....kuch nahi karo to cool....sunny day >cool.....cold night>cool....LITRARY FOOL, WAHT'S COOL..?
  11. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    galti se sahi baat bol di aapne....suchi muchi----:)
  12. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    how can u say
    galti se.....
    hum sab sooch samajh ke kehte hain
    ye degar baat hai ki, aksar chup-chup rehte hain..!!

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