limpbizkit - take a look around - CHECK IN PEOPLE!

hi people,

I am a new member here.

Please guide me about the voacals as i got the time limit of just 30 days to improve it, as much as i could.

I had started with TAKE A LOOK AROUND - LIMP BIZKIT (MI2 TRACK) as i thought it would be easy.

So please give your feed back and guidance. no matter how ever harsh but speak truth. i wont even mind if someone ask me to leave VOCALS thing.. but speak truth because i want to improve my vocals.

abouth this file - the sound quality of this file got little weird as i tried adding some effects and i did not make any back up of the previous one.

Thank you,
people.. waiting for your comments!

here is link..

muziboo.com/fredy_limpy/music/take-a-look-aroun

 

man u gta work out lyk nethn 4 d next thirty days ....besta luk

 

Very Very difficult... but i surely wanna hear u after a months time.. Good Luck..

Tips:
Stop smoking(in case u do)
Drink Warm water
Practice early morning

 

what is exact wrong things.. how should i improve it.. how should i go over it.. what should i work on ..please suggest some points!

 

if u can't make out the flaws in ur singing .. then it's even more difficult..
Tips i've given.. they'll help u to improve to some extent..

 

if u can't make out the flaws in ur singing .. then it's even more difficult..
Tips i've given.. they'll help u to improve to some extent..

 

where have you given the tips bro.. i am unable to figure out..?

:s

 

see this...

 

why are you posting english songs in the hindi section

 

I think this thread shouldnt be der but neway regarding ur vocals it was totally flat u need proper training for that