lil girl

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nandy0894, Sep 3, 2011.

  1. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    lil girl on the road in the rain
    smiles even though she is in pain
    her eyes are red yet she's smilin
    inside she feels the frustration piling
    when she sees nobody's around
    she lets her tears drop to the ground
    while they mingle with the water
    she seats herself in a dark quater
    wishing someone would come over
    she hugs herself tighter
    drownin in her memories
    she smiles at the butterflies and the bees
    then she looks at the bubbles
    wipes her tears..forgetting troubles
    when the heavy rain turns to drizzling
    a guy passes her whistling
    he smiles at her ..she turns
    he makes a face and walks on
    tears well up again
    she dabs at em..removin the stains
    with all her efforts in vain
    she smiles ..this time at the rain
    and the same thing repeats again
    every year, during every rain
    lil girl on the road in the rain
    goes home with no tears and no pain
    lil girl on the road in the rain
    smiles even though she's in pain
    lil girl on the road in the rain
    goes home with no tears and no pain..
     
  2. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    great job lil girl....
     
  3. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    i am 17..! hence not lil.. :p nyways thank you.. :)
     
  4. very good wirting .. the simplcity of expressions often gives poems more thoughts than it was concived for ... kuddos to the lil girl for maintaning the simplicity.

    Keep posting :D would love to hear more from you.
     
  5. U R little .... :D
     
  6. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    @monica..thanku thanku...nd yes sure i will keep posting.. :)
    but i am nooooooootttttttttttttttt lil.. !! 17 is only one year short of being an adult...hence i am not lil..lalala :D
     

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