Light My Cigarette

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by shashankgothic, Jul 3, 2009.

  1. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    I’d a cigarette; you’d the light.
    We didn’t have to fight.
    You only had to ignite
    And I’d share it right.

    We could’ve had a smoke
    Later, maybe a coke
    Shared many a joke
    And in laughter we’d choke.

    You said, “Let’s do it. Quick!
    More than you, I need the kick.”
    So, I pulled out the tobacco stick
    And, said, “Light it, chick.”

    You made the sound I wanted to hear.
    I said, "Honey, so glad you're here."
    For a spark, I came near.
    And you set my world on fire!
  2. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

  3. distorted

    distorted satan

    Yr odr works r better mate... This ones quite amateurish...
    Newys, u write rly well... Luking fwd fr sum darker stuff frm u...
  4. vstanv

    vstanv New Member

    next time, try to get past the aaaa bbbb kind of rhyme... this type is rather monotonous.
    try aabb aabb or even better, abab cdcd type...

    distorted: looking for darker stuf?? bein distorted huh? :D
  5. shashankgothic

    shashankgothic New Member

    k will definately work thanxxx
  6. distorted

    distorted satan

    I've alwys been so...

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