Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by walk_alone, Apr 28, 2008.

  1. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    I have blamed thee for so long
    detested every thought of you
    cribbed and craved of mercy

    but how foolish have I been

    it was me all along

    I say sorry for all my sins
    I repent for all my misdeeds
    I bow my head to thee

    forgive my ignorance
    forgive my bounderish

    for its you after all I seek.

    Iam content, Iam subject
    Iam glee...
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    waht u wanted to say is ... ur just a puppet of play whatever u did was gods own wish so y bend before him ...or may be this is also his wish..good thought .....if im correct ?
  3. augur

    augur I love bjr

    I forgive but never forget.
  4. fairandlovely

    fairandlovely peeka-boo

    somehow the old language seems pretentious because the setting doesn't warrant it and you've only used it for one particular word. where are the thous and the hasts and doths?

    The last 2 lines sound nice but don't make sense. Any explanations on that?
  5. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    been away for too long.

    I just used "Thee" coz i thot it fitted the sentence much better than "you".
    I dont intend to be pretentious, else i would have used it all over for watever I could.

    Anyway, last 2 lines are just "an admission". Thxs for liking then


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