Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, Jun 13, 2006.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    An old poem..

    But the right occasion ;)

    When life is in the ruins
    Getting dingy aint no cure
    Find the words measuring the emotions
    Write a song, put it to some music
    Let the heart take you over
    That one heart is all your left with
    Keep it happy, happy to for you to be with
    Marry away the sadness and gloom
    Let a smile like the tulip on your lip bloom
    They say everything has a reason
    Everything has a season
    Life's summers await the spring
    A seed falls to earth
    Makes it the womb or its own tomb
    Water it with love
    Care for it weeding it from worries free
    It'l grow into something beautiful
    Plant it yourself.
    Life is your's
    Live it with glee


    Comments if you like it or dislike
    either ways its fine with me

    Thanks for reading
  2. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    >Let the heart take you over
    That one heart is all your left with<

    Loved this lines ,and the poem too ;-)
  3. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    So do i :eek:)
    thanks Apu
  4. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    good one.....
    apna funda "keep smiling"..
    ........That one heart is all your left with.....good line
  5. #iR@


  6. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Thanks Manu & Hira
    i guess this was the only pleasant poem i ever wrote;)
  7. bored

    bored New Member

    itz really nice ..........it touched my heart.........
    actually 4 past few days i was looking 4 lyf n i think i've found it here ....thanx
  8. very nice poetry by all of you
  9. skaw

    skaw snooze

    should be:
    Let the heart take you over
    That one heart is all [b]you're[/b] left with
    Great poem though, it makes one realize things.
    detritus likes this.
  10. Hell'n Wheels

    Hell'n Wheels New Member

    I like the analogy. Life=growing,nurturing and care required for good growth,as a gardener. Your should be spelled you're ,though. Hell'n
  11. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    @bored- i like people from Kolkata...sweet as mishti doi :eek:)..
    thanks for the comments

    @Skaw- *bows* thanks a lot dude..
    i donno how i made that mistake ...guess i never checked :eek::
    thanks though..
    @Helln--thanks :)
  12. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    dont kno how did i miss this....nice one Martina...
  13. zicky5608

    zicky5608 Power Shortage

    Oh an old one..but pretty nice =)..
  14. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    Nice, nothing to bitch about.

    Practice what you preach though :-*

    Everything has a season? I personally disagree even though there are times I'll have a hard time countering what you say, It's one principle I don't like living by somehow.

    So is there a season for holding hands?

    *wiggles eyebrows*
  15. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Nice inspirational piece...!

    Keep it up, Dear...!

  16. this is kind of OK.... big deal ??
    who said i ws like her !!
  17. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    I did. I never said you write like her. You just act like her.

    and I hate to break it to you but most of your poems are kind of OK too.
  18. ^ i smell some thing...ok so she ws close to some
    sineP......bubblymartini give it back .....

    no comparision's.
  19. elfascinating

    elfascinating risqué

    Monica_decosta .. tits or GTFO
  20. abcdefg...wahtever .... Mind it !

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