..:-Life-:..

An old poem..

But the right occasion
-Life-

When life is in the ruins
Getting dingy aint no cure
Find the words measuring the emotions
Write a song, put it to some music
Let the heart take you over
That one heart is all your left with
Keep it happy, happy to for you to be with
Marry away the sadness and gloom
Let a smile like the tulip on your lip bloom
They say everything has a reason
Everything has a season
Life's summers await the spring
A seed falls to earth
Makes it the womb or its own tomb
Water it with love
Care for it weeding it from worries free
It'l grow into something beautiful
Plant it yourself.
Life is your's
Live it with glee

---`-,--;--<@

Comments if you like it or dislike
either ways its fine with me

Thanks for reading

 

>Let the heart take you over
That one heart is all your left with<

Loved this lines ,and the poem too ;-)

 

So do i )
thanks Apu

 

good one.....
apna funda "keep smiling"..
........That one heart is all your left with.....good line

 

*SPEECHLESS*:nw:

 

Thanks Manu & Hira
i guess this was the only pleasant poem i ever wrote

 

itz really nice ..........it touched my heart.........
actually 4 past few days i was looking 4 lyf n i think i've found it here ....thanx

 

very nice poetry by all of you

 

should be:

Code:

Let the heart take you over
That one heart is all [b]you're[/b] left with

Great poem though, it makes one realize things.

 

I like the analogy. Life=growing,nurturing and care required for good growth,as a gardener. Your should be spelled you're ,though. Hell'n

 

@bored- i like people from Kolkata...sweet as mishti doi )..
thanks for the comments

@Skaw- *bows* thanks a lot dude..
i donno how i made that mistake ...guess i never checked :
thanks though..
@Helln--thanks

 

dont kno how did i miss this....nice one Martina...

 

Oh an old one..but pretty nice =)..

 

Nice, nothing to bitch about.

Practice what you preach though :-*


Everything has a season? I personally disagree even though there are times I'll have a hard time countering what you say, It's one principle I don't like living by somehow.


So is there a season for holding hands?


*wiggles eyebrows*

 

Nice inspirational piece...!

Keep it up, Dear...!

 

this is kind of OK.... big deal ??
who said i ws like her !!

 

I did. I never said you write like her. You just act like her.


and I hate to break it to you but most of your poems are kind of OK too.

 

^ i smell some thing...ok so she ws close to some
sineP......bubblymartini give it back .....

no comparision's.

 

Monica_decosta .. tits or GTFO

 

abcdefg...wahtever .... Mind it !