Life!

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Mar 21, 2006.

  1. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    hello everyone... another poem...


     LIFE?

    Life is rain
    And I am its drop
    Life is a rainbow
    And I am its colours
    Life is a body
    And I am its heart
    Life is a sky
    And I am its sun
    Life is river
    And I am its water
    Life is a valley
    And I am its depth
    Life is a relation
    And I am its love
    Life is a game
    And I am its player
    Life is a drama
    And I am its actor
    Life is a speech
    And I am its words
    Life is to live
    Do I deserve too?

    thx for reading.... :) comments....
     
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  2. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    yes

    lovely poem dear...
    the thoughts are pure and unadulterated..
    i presume being so good at simplicity and excellence comes naturally to u.. :)
     
  3. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ya u deserve to live obviously....

    also,

    life is a mental hospital,
    and im its DEAN......
     
  4. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ bubbly.... THX A LOT GURL! :) means a lOT!

    @ abhi.... thx for reading...but man...aik baat hai... KISI **** *** **** ho! :p: hehe
     
  5. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ^^ hahaa..par us din to aaya thaa.....yaad hain ??
     
  6. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    ^ lol.... yaad hai ....
     
  7. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    *sniff**sniff* amazin poem - the last part really touched a chord in my heart...luvlil..luvli*sniff*....reps too....*sniff*...
     
  8. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    ^ wow! thx man!!! :D means a LOT!
     
  9. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    this concept is not that fresh dear... and looks monotonus...
    so didnt liked it quite well...
    i know..u do lot better than that..
     
  10. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    @ nimisha... thx a lot dear... honest opinions are always welcome! :) appreciate ur comments.
     
  11. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    hey dear - why duz every dear here add dear in front of their deary li'l comments dear....dear - i'd never do such a thing...dear...lmao :RollLol:
    No offence..
     
  12. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ^^ coz dude ,the other dear is more very dear to this dear and so dearingly she/he puts the dear in front of the dearly comment.......
     
  13. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    ^^:annoyed: ajeeb bakwaas hai yaar... this dear thing is confusing! :eek::
     
  14. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    :RollLol:
    no dear - its just the dearest thing this dear site has seen so dear dearest dear is the in thing on this deary forum so dont ferget to deary dear in ur next dear post...hey - dear - im just deary wonderin - why do dear ppl kil dear deer...i mean these dear deer are as dear as people - dear not?
     
  15. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    ^ just 2 words: WAT TRASH! :annoyed:
     
  16. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    to all dears in this dear thread of hira"s.. can i ask u all.. one dear favour of discountinuing this dear spam.. thanks in advance dear...
     
  17. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    :sorry:???
     
  18. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    THX NIMISHA! :nw:


    its ok fat_kax! :p:
     
  19. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----> Zhol-Man<----

    ok dear....""stops ""
     
  20. fat_kax

    fat_kax Kickin Ass Since 1989 !

    dear hira ur such a dear - thanx dear fer acceptin my dear appoligies dear...*stops*...:eek::
     

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