Life is Good...By Petunia

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Petunia, Nov 29, 2005.

  1. Petunia

    Petunia terminally dorky

    hey everyone..this is a poem that i had written a long while back and had originally shared it with cryptic angel..and upon HIS advice and request i have posted it up to share with you all..happy reading! a great big thnks to you, aNgeL :D

    They say I’m crazy, but it’s not true.
    They put me up.
    They killed me, deep down inside
    A suffering that stills pain
    I’m not a man any more.

    Kids laugh and shout above me
    They sound alive,
    Alive and healthy
    Warm and cared for.
    Where are my children?

    Ironic as death,
    This feels peaceful.
    A tranquil serenity fills my body and soul.
    Deep down inside I keep telling myself.
    Life is good

    Passive as it is, an urgent panic runs through my body
    Life made its paths for me, and left some unattended ditches for me
    But, what about this, has it come to this
    And yet, as I lay in this dark grave of mine
    As a soul on its own, I tell myself
    God has ways and
    Life is good.
  2. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    HER not HIS.....

    anyways, ur welcome and fantastic poem (like i told u b4)!
  3. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    :) nice poem indeed...keep them rolling in :rockon:
  4. Petunia

    Petunia terminally dorky

    yikes...apology out to cryptic...:) There was a lil gender confusion..but i think we got all figured out, aye, cryp? ;)

    keep chillin, dudette...

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