Life is Beautiful

Hi guys.... dunno what to say abt this one. I guess i will just leave it for you all to give your comments.

I look out of the window to see the world
I see life
In the eyes of the new born
Life has just begun
The first step, the first word
For the mother means the world
Life is beautiful
Commemorate its arrival
For when it will depart
There will be vacuity around

I look out of the window to see the world
I see joy
On the face of the newly wed
For life has just begun
New hopes, new dreams
New goals to be achieved
Life is beautiful
Live every moment
For when you lose your love
Hurt will be eternal

I look out of the window to see the world
I see pain
In the affliction of man kind
Life has just begun
New failures, new losses, new defeats
New frustrations in store
Life is beautiful
Congregate strength and courage
For life has all ingredients
To facade it all

I look out of the window to see the world
I descry and yearn no more
Now the time has run out on me
But life still remains beautiful
No new hopes, no new heights
That I desire to achieve
For the day has arrived
When I will be one with Deus
Settle peacefully
In his heavenly abode

 

WHOAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!( guess you know whether i like it or not)

 

Now that was pretty fast :
U just took 2 minutes to read it n post it.. :think:
did ya actually read it ?? I wonder !!
Thanks if you did
I somehow knew u ll be the first one...

 

I read faster than a drug junkie on crack(horrible analogy), but yep, as soon as i saw a poem bearing your title, i'm like SCORE and i read it. Wonderful use of words and good theme, i love it!

 

Grammer check..as soon as i see :

Thanks i m glad you liked it

 

^And have you picked up on checking the thesaurus too? Hm? *wiggles eyebrows*(Copyright, all rights reserved by BJR, used without permission)

 

*sigh* when wud the day come when i wud say
" i looked out of the window to see the world
& I saw Varshita....a gr88888 poetess"
when??? when???? when??? :cry2:
CANT REP U :cry2: :cry2:
amazing is the word i guess :think:.....for the poem :grin:

 

^Lemme thesaurus that, better word is, She's Thaumaturgic :grin:

 

^^^u made me use dictionery again :annoyed: but it ws worth it :grin: & yea, i agree with ya....

 

^That's my job, as a proof-reader :grin:

 

You never told me abt the copyrights... :

@garima... I look out of the window and i SEE varshita... a great poetess
kam se kam .. poem se copy to theek maro :
Thank u !!

For Thaumaturgic... wah yaar.. mere bhao bada diye tumne

 

^You misunderstand, *wiggles eyebrows* is an expression exclusively developed and used by BJR.
Thaumaturgic is a good word, hehe :grin:

 

copy karna fitrat me nahi hamari....
woh to sara sentence past tense me kar dala tha...shaan me tumhari
*wah wah* :grin: :

 

@ sarat.. shouldnt it be.. "You misunderstood...." either ur grammer has gone of a toss.. or i m having some probs :

@ garima... kya baat hai kya baat hai... mujhe maar daala.. mujhe past tense ka hissa bana daala :

 

1 Word 2 describe how the poem is "WOW!!"
Keep up the good work...iv started posting in garima's & varshita's threads now seen as fatima's left igt so soon silly girl she's got so much good writing she's come up with!Dont know wht the hell she went for!

 

@broken Heart... Thank you !!

 

Hindi mein translate karo na .....

kisi nay woh baadal ki kahaani suni hain jo paani se vapour, akaash ko chhoone ki koshish karta, hawao se itraata hain, saare aasmaan ko apna samazh kar udta rehta hain aur phir pahaado se takra kar waapas paani ban jaata hain.... .. DESTINY ????

maine bhi nahi suni hain...

but i liked this:

copy karna fitrat me nahi hamari....
woh to sara sentence past tense me kar dala tha...shaan me tumhari

@ garima... kya baat hai kya baat hai... mujhe maar daala.. mujhe past tense ka hissa bana daala

but y u both r showing this pumpkin face -> :

:beer:

 

^^
Kya kuch bhi samajh nahi aaya?? wil try n post a hindi version for u.

 

no no yaar...doosri baar nahi seh sakta hoon... : ..hehehe..

aaya yaar samzh ..itna bhi nahi hoon..

yehi hain na hindi mein.. mere saamney waali khidki mein ek chaand ka tukda rehta hain.... :rock:

knight kaun hain... :help:

 

ever heard of Knight in shining armour?? :think: