@Shak, Vini....another sad poem from me... duniya gol hai...so here I am bk to square one....with another sad poem...it mite not ryhme, mite lack the flow....but this is wat i came up with... in less than 10min I wish I could end End this suffering Suffering called Life… They say it’s a gift Gift to those who r blessed But not for me As I’m cursed Cursed to suffer…to go through pain Cursed to cry….to have no-one who care These tears hurt me more More than a wound or an open cut Each tear rolling down my cheek Remind me that I’m cursed Wounded by no-one… But by those who r close to me
ah...looks like poems can hardly be written on a brighter note! i think even i cant!! y write a poem when ur happy?..lolz everyone's life is a curse..welcome to club! be happy to know that ur not alone..chin up!! :grin: lets count our blessings!
another great poem garima...strong feelings create good poetry...i like these preliminary lines a lot... "I wish I could end End this suffering Suffering called Life… They say it’s a gift Gift to those who r blessed But not for me As I’m cursed"....<<<aren't we all cursed?i know i have that curse...lol...the real "gifts" are friends...tears ...and poetry...they all help to relieve life's burdens....
nice garima... really liked it even i write sad poems only, tried writing happy ones but they always turn out crappy hbbt:
sad ... gloomy ... dark ... depressing ... yet!!!!! powerfull ... emotional ... 100% garry!! waisay .. this is the all time low/gloomy poem from you buddy ... life aint that bad you know .. a lot of things to smile upon .. all around you .. one just has to look!! e.g .. i can look out of the window .. and see a snowless backyard .. and i cant help but smile for the "hardworking" and "handsome" .. "lad" .... who did that ... .. smiling?? great!!!!
.... hey hi dude! i was searching thru n i came crss ur poem. i have a thing for dramtic poety..mainly cos i can relate so well with them. And i found urs quite compelling. i hate to be one of thse freako's who sits there nalyzin everything but to come up wth something like that in bout tn minutes is not bad..not bad at all. With that said i thot id share something of mine with you...its something more-or less that i found in my prtfolio that slightly contradicts with "ur curse" happy reading! IM CRAZY They say I’m crazy, but it’s not true. They put me up. They killed me, deep down inside A suffering that stills pain I’m not a man any more. Kids laugh and shout above me They sound alive, Alive and healthy Warm and cared for. Where are my children? Ironic as death, This feels peaceful. A tranquil serenity fills my body and soul. Deep down inside I keep telling myself. Life is good Passive as it is, an urgent panic runs through my body Life made its paths for me, and left some unattended ditches for me But, what about this, has it come to this And yet, as I lay in this dark grave of mine As a soul on its own, I tell myself God has ways and Life is good.
^^^nice one yaar....y dont u post ur poems here on IGT.& thanks for reading mine Welcome to IGT....& Happy IGTing....make sure u dont get addicted :grin:
hmm maybe i shud.. thnks...im here cos of a favor...but this place is strting to grw on me now! LOL. well ill be cyin ya... btw..let me know when the nxt "sad sob story" comes out
nicely written!! it gives me a sense of pain but something was missing i dont know what. may be u'd know. reps for u.
@itwasnoteasy...thanx dude...so u did post ur comments thanx for those words... somethng missing :think: ...evn i dont kno wat....need rocking_devil for a research...LoL
Hello Garima ??? u there ??? Ur poem is full of sincere feelings so .. "IF" ur alive right now .. u'l be glad to hear dat ur poem is great .. but i feel very sorry dat ur ending ur life : .. see u in hell!! PS-reps for u .. Secret :secret: - i really liked it
well...m very much zinda....they dint let me die so soon...cuz they say that they r addicted to me : &by the way...y r u so sure that u'll go to Hell...:think: m sure u wud hv ur own reasons for that....but so sad we wont b able to meet cuz i sure am gonna b in Heaven : Secret :secret: kno wat....this is the most funny,interesting,cute reply to any of my poems...thanx ALOT
Well .. wen i said see u in hell wat i was actually sure was dat u'll be in hell .. n i'll come sometimes to visit u there : by takin god's permission hehe .. anyway .. MOst funny, interesting, cute reply to Any of ur poem !!!! boy i really feel great .. here's somethin for u *HUG* .. muh pleasure buddy
