Hey guys.. Another torture for you all.. specially ansh and sadu..: Took a while.. but i think its turned out well. Saying that you love me only answers one of the many questions I have asked u so many times I know it takes a lot for you to say that you love me anyway I don’t want to say you are wrong Nor I want to point to your flaws Its so difficult for me to talk to you Tell you whats wrong When you take everything I say as a shot at you And feel that I m trying to put you down I love you why would I ever do that? Some questions are to be left…just like that? I never called you selfish A burden or demanding All that came from you Was our relationship too good to be true? After all the efforts put in by me Here I m standing all alone Setting you free When I said I don’t wanna burden you anymore I was serious I have had enough And I see no point in explaining myself anymore Coz its already fixed in your mind And I don’t feel the need to stay I couldn’t take it.. just no more Were you scared or happy? Cos it seems that I was leaving for good Or were you ever really sorry? I ve always wondered How you would react if I said I was leaving? Which is something I ve always thought about doing by the way : Would you beg for me to stay? Or just let me silently walk away? I love you baby Isnt that reason enough for you to love me Or do we need a better reason to make you stay? Or better still maybe.. I don’t want you anyways !! Sorry about the smiley.. but it was too tempting
@varshu.. u already know my views, right? thank u for sharing it with me...i feel special its an AMAZING AMAZING POEM... reps for u.. P.S..the title is amazing as well:
Thank you angela... for me hunting for a right title is much more difficult than writing the poem. But that adeau = white mushroom was good !! :RollLol:
heck yeah!!!!!!!!! "oh my white mushroom, i bid u fareweill now......it had been so much fun being with u.....i would never forget u...but now, :giveup: (in aside, whoz that hotty standing over there )
not bad the best part in d poem were the smileys & : hehe.. kinda added a touch of light humour 2 ur othrwise serious poem :>. title of poem was nice. much b8r thn ur igt title :, kiddin. :grin: tk cre.
@ shubhro... Thank you. I know.. even i got bored of the seriousness of my poem. Hence the smileys :...... using this pwas the most tempting of all !! @ zoom... koi aur reply kare na kare.. i m sure u always will Thank you.
Sarat... pitoge tum !! No hyperlink referencing to other people in my thread !! This is MY poem...let it be like dat. Kiddo... so u found my poem funny eh?
what are you crying for now ?? : Should i be at your absence from work? You still havent finished your last assignment !! :think: Allrite then...No salary for this month : *enjoys all the chocolates herself*
brilliantly ended!!...no seriously..the way the poem ends counts for many points and i like the way u ended it good
@ vini.. thank you.. "brilliantly ended"... Literally or figuratively ? :think: worked really hard on that bit... Wanted to have a strong ending !! @ uj ... umm... maybe i should come up with an unusual bad one .. to get a good comment from ya :... Thank you !!
lol, your critic/proof-reader is swamped with tests and assignments right now :grin: As soon as he gets a breather he'll be back on track and save those chocolates for me!!!!!!!
