Letting go...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Varshita, Feb 19, 2006.

  1. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Hey guys.. Another torture for you all.. specially ansh and sadu..:p:
    Took a while.. but i think its turned out well.

    Saying that you love me only answers
    one of the many questions I have asked u so many times
    I know it takes a lot for you to say
    that you love me anyway

    I don’t want to say you are wrong
    Nor I want to point to your flaws
    Its so difficult for me to talk to you
    Tell you whats wrong
    When you take everything I say as a shot at you
    And feel that I m trying to put you down
    I love you
    why would I ever do that?
    Some questions are to be left…just like that?

    I never called you selfish
    A burden or demanding
    All that came from you
    Was our relationship too good to be true?
    After all the efforts put in by me
    Here I m standing all alone
    Setting you free

    When I said I don’t wanna burden you anymore
    I was serious
    I have had enough
    And I see no point in explaining myself anymore
    Coz its already fixed in your mind
    And I don’t feel the need to stay
    I couldn’t take it.. just no more

    Were you scared or happy?
    Cos it seems that I was leaving for good
    Or were you ever really sorry?
    I ve always wondered
    How you would react if I said I was leaving?
    Which is something I ve always thought about doing by the way :p:
    Would you beg for me to stay?
    Or just let me silently walk away?
    I love you baby
    Isnt that reason enough for you to love me
    Or do we need a better reason to make you stay?
    Or better still
    maybe.. I don’t want you anyways !!

    Sorry about the smiley.. but it was too tempting :)
  2. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    u already know my views, right?
    thank u for sharing it with me...i feel special:)
    reps for u..
    P.S..the title is amazing as well:p:
  3. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Thank you angela... for me hunting for a right title is much more difficult than writing the poem. :)

    But that adeau = white mushroom was good !! :RollLol:
  4. guitarangela

    guitarangela gran'ma

    heck yeah!!!!!!!!!

    "oh my white mushroom, i bid u fareweill now......it had been so much fun being with u.....i would never forget u...but now, :giveup: (in aside, whoz that hotty standing over there;) )
  5. Subhro

    Subhro Argentina lost :"(

    not bad :)

    the best part in d poem were the smileys :) & :p: hehe.. kinda added a touch of light humour 2 ur othrwise serious poem :>.

    title of poem was nice. much b8r thn ur igt title :p:, kiddin. :grin: tk cre.
  6. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Nice one dear...
    Keep writing ;)

  7. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Laughing my ass off, your poem should end this way
    "See ye on the 'light' side punk!"
  8. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ shubhro... Thank you. I know.. even i got bored of the seriousness of my poem. Hence the smileys :p:...... using this :)p:)was the most tempting of all !! :)

    @ zoom... koi aur reply kare na kare.. i m sure u always will :) Thank you.
  9. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Sarat... pitoge tum !!
    No hyperlink referencing to other people in my thread !!
    This is MY poem...let it be like dat.
    Kiddo... so u found my poem funny eh? :)
  10. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    ^:-( *goes to corner and cries*.............
  11. aysh

    aysh -|h3 ori9in4| (ui!aris-|-

    IGT girls are the most melodramatic of 'em all :yawn:
  12. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    what are you crying for now ?? :eek::
    Should i be :mad: at your absence from work?
    You still havent finished your last assignment !! :think:
    Allrite then...No salary for this month :p:
    *enjoys all the chocolates herself*
  13. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    thank you @ nemo :eek::
  14. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    brilliantly ended!!...no seriously..the way the poem ends counts for many points and i like the way u ended it :)
  15. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    :yawn: the usual great poems!
  16. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    @ vini.. thank you.. "brilliantly ended"... Literally or figuratively ? :think:
    worked really hard on that bit... Wanted to have a strong ending !! :)

    @ uj ... umm... maybe i should come up with an unusual bad one .. to get a good comment from ya :p:... Thank you !!
  17. the_wizard

    the_wizard Omega == God

    oye :annoyed:

    hmm too mny questions asked...
    good poem nontheless....
  18. vini

    vini Repeat Offender

    literally ofcourse..dearie!! :)
  19. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    :) lol, your critic/proof-reader is swamped with tests and assignments right now :grin: As soon as he gets a breather he'll be back on track and save those chocolates for me!!!!!!!
  20. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    good poem!!
    but u said u wldnt write again...:p:

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