hello everyone... i am back with an other poem... hope u guys like it and like always looking forward to ur comments! this work of mine is not exactly like a poem, these r just some thoughts put into short words i think... so here goes... Lets make a change! Living on the same land With the same emotions Then why the differentiation between every colour and creed Why these wars Why the bloodshed Why the torture Don’t u realize How all this Could wrap us all in melancholy? How it could lead us to degradation? I skim through the papers Derogatory remarks jump up at me “Why?” Is all I ask Why do we have to carry the same belief… Our ancestors followed? Why can’t we join hands and make a change? Its high time that we realize the truth about each other Come together u all… Lets join hands And make a change Let us be the ones to decide our present And our future! THANKS FOR READING..... don't forget to comment! waiting...
@ write2madhur & sharmontime... thanks but i don't think i will be accepting it! hehe : @ amit... thanks man @ apurbajd.... thanks... always looking forward for comments! any more comments or any advice for me? :think:
really nice progressive thoughts.... i loved it man....damn awesome!!!! sorry cant rep u...i need to spread.... keep it up:beer:
Hmmm....Hira...u think so much gurl....but nice...cos evry change is first initiated in ur thots...& then in reality....first part is already done by u....for the second one...m ready too
@uj_6string .... thanks a LOT man! @ garima... thanks for ur comments gurl! always looking forward to them! ummm.... yea i do think a lot and thats a thing my friends hate about me!: eventhough i take it as a quality of mine! hehe.... well.... i think i have done the thinking part i.e the first step and now we all need to take the next step together as one!
same here man....me thinks too much.....but i think itz good..... agreed.....u need to feel it first......then u can bring about a change... uj:rock:
