Let me hold you tight tonight pull you a bit closer paint a tender rose on your forehead I know your lips are long dried Let me be your guide tonight to this fantasy ride a nostalgic ride on the memory horse and a ride back on the passionate hope cart Let me wipe the tears off those long dried eyes shedding pearls for so many days still not lost its innocent shine Let me be the repenting sinner for all the pains I caused you and I will try to heal those with my love for you If only you guide me through my prayers And we know that the shadow of the past still lingers on that sometimes we lose our way in the fantasy ride and we still try to count how many dreams you and I lost in those sleepless nights So let me be just myself and love you the way I do let us continue this fantasy ride In search of hope and the sun And all those dreams we lost in those sleepless nights. ----------------- Comments /suggestions plz ................
apurbajd, i shall tell you what i feel after at least 5 distinct replies. Because, here, I understand, the replies are basically based on the first few, and I don't want me to influence the future replies....(No offences meant, general human tendency). But I shall tell you for sure. -Sharmontime.
make a song dude make a song! put it to some music its good and its song material.. if its a crow that u sing like..so be it! last two lines of first para give me a feeling of incompleteness.. i liked And we know that the shadow of the past still lingers on that sometimes we lose our way in the fantasy ride and we still try to count how many dreams you and I lost in those sleepless nights
OH MAN... i LOVE WAT U RITE! AWESOME!!!!! MAKE A SONG FOR SURE!!!! UFFff..... ALAAAa!!!!! i mean i am reading this at like 2 in the morn and i JUST DON"T KNOW WAT TO SAY... AWESOME!!!!! reps... & MAKE A SONG OUTTA IT! :rock:
That was WOW Apurba....m gonna send this to some one rite away... some beautiful words with beautiful feelings....reps for ya...
@Sharm ... well waiting 4 ur comment... @Bubbs ... thanx a lot, and if u wanna hear a crow sing , well I may try if I get enuf time ;-) @Hira... Its always nice to go thru ur comments, glad that u liked it so much. and no probs with reps,its the comments which matter more ... @Garima ... send this to someone?:think: lemme guess ?? Thanx for the comment and reps ...
sahi hai biduu .. sab thik keh rahe hain ...but do consider the meter 5th para is out of order ..maine gaa ke try kiyaa