let her...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, Dec 14, 2005.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    poem titled as...

    Let her...

    Let her cry alone
    She just needs some distance
    Let her be on her own
    She dont need assistance

    i believe she's strong
    though the way is long
    i believe she will
    soon get along

    She'll take some time
    For doubts to clear
    To make up her mind
    to win over the fear

    so let her cry alone...

    Let her think in deep
    For what mistakes she've made
    Let her just peep
    In her own heart n head

    i belive she'll find
    a tender mind
    i believe she'll know
    its one of a kind

    Ruling her brain
    Giving so pain
    But making her firm
    Though eyes r pouring rain

    so let her cry alone...

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    nimisha, Dec 14, 2005
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  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    even this is good i wounder how i missed this ?
    reps added ;)
     
    madhuresh, Oct 13, 2006
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  3. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e <3V/S<3 50 CeNt$

    hey ....nice poem


    apreciations * & RePs *
     
    sanju_strings, Oct 13, 2006
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  4. Sheerig

    Sheerig New Member

    @nim... nice one... good thought,
    and u meant so much...
     
    Sheerig, Oct 13, 2006
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  5. akkyy21

    akkyy21 #%@!$&

    even one line could have served the purpose....

    Let her cry, dont give a fcuk :p
     
    akkyy21, Oct 13, 2006
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  6. #iR@

    #iR@ GANDI BACHI RELOADED

    simply awesome... really liked it! :)
     
    #iR@, Oct 20, 2006
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  7. pushedaway

    pushedaway New Member

    Awesome one! :D
     
    pushedaway, Nov 2, 2006
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  8. geniusoid

    geniusoid Acoustic Alchemist

    sounds more fit for a rap song somehow ;) - the rhymin scheme i mean
     
    geniusoid, Nov 2, 2006
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  9. pushedaway

    pushedaway New Member

    Agree^^

    It can be a good "Rapcore" song.
     
    pushedaway, Nov 2, 2006
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  10. buddhu_baalak

    buddhu_baalak Banned

    nimmo.. as good as always..
     
    buddhu_baalak, Nov 10, 2006
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  11. monica_decosta

    monica_decosta Active Member

    dear u sound sooo real....i wonder what makes u write such stuff..
     
    monica_decosta, Nov 10, 2006
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  12. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    :nw: :nw:
    first of all many thanks to madhuresh to notice this poem..
    i posted it when i was newbie here.. so may be my 'newbie' factor was responsible for 'no replies'
    well.. it kinda happens wit every newbie here:mad:

    anyways.. thanks to all of you who appreciated my efforts,as this is the most fav poem of mine..



    @pushedaway and @geniusoid.. i kinda composed this poem wit a nice tune years ago, but havent recorded.. lets see, if i can work on it now.. thanks
     
    nimisha, Nov 15, 2006
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