Dil-e-gham jab aah kartha hai, tho log ushe sayari kahethe hai....Likha tumne itni khubi se...ki aaj ye dil bhi tume sayaar kahetha hai. _______________ The Wandering Soul
@spy game... :Laughing: :Laughing: thanks bro... ur efforts to read and understand my poem... even though u dont read hindi poems much.. means so much to me... @G. shrinivas.. :nw: :nw:
hey nimi was wondering why u were not writing ur poems here ..... didnt know u had problems ... n e ways its good to see u back n in ur own way .... hope u keep writing ur stuff and b always happy ...... nice poem btw Regards, Nimit
Hi nimisa I need no effort to understand hindi because I first wrote in hindi when I raised pen to write. Most of my work is hindi. I do write in English rarely. You know I started writing in English because of the encouragement of one of my best friend. I am glad that u write good hindi. Kinare se poochtha hai koi machli se kya tum tairna janthe ho..laugh... ___________________ The Wandering Soul
Its a beautiful one... despite the flaws that people mentioned.. which had gone unnoticed by me. Mohsin... its not the expression that one cares about when one writes a poem. "kalam fut fut ke ro rahi" ... I can so relate to what she has written. Good one nimi.. welcome back :beer:
nimmi-di charan-sfarsh aapke peyr kahan hain mujhe choomne hai bohot khoob likha hai aapne yeh sher bhi... aur ek woh sher bhi tha aapka jisne dilko chhu liya tha...woh qalam ki siyahi wala kya baat hai aapki toh didi love you a lot -ur sis from hindilyrics arpi
sanju... better late than never...thanks.. arpi is my friend from another forum... n we had great days there... now she came here to win every'1's heart again.... its my pride to have such a friend n such a sweet sis.. @ujsen....as usual...nice to see reply from ur side... thankssssss.........
Hi ...u r a great writer...you might help to complete my song ..which is incomplete for so long....lacking words....i guess u have ocean of words with correct sense to use.... Good Job..
