Last act

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by maverick8218, Dec 29, 2004.

  1. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    Another of my songs...

    Last Act

    I have played my part,
    Played with all my heart.
    My curtains are falling down,
    I got to be going home.

    Spent a night with my friends,
    Who had advised me to make mends.
    I couldn’t be the perfect friend,
    But kept trying till the end.

    Repeat chorus.

    I had a talk with my folks,
    Returning home after long.
    They had wanted a perfect son,
    I sure couldn’t be the one.

    Repeat chorus.

    Had a showdown with my girl,
    She had never noticed me.
    She always fancied the perfect man,
    But a creep is all I am.

    Repeat chorus.
  2. tejas

    tejas ..........

    Nice work mav. Am I right in saying you show a little shakespearen influence?
  3. bob-bobby

    bob-bobby Extinct or Banned!

    hey mav great work there maen ,,.. should say its a rockin love song ... :beer: really nice one ....
  4. d_ist_urb_ed

    d_ist_urb_ed Genuflect b*tches!

    Nice work mav:beer: Cool piece of work:)
  5. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    yup tejas, you are right in saying that i used the shakespearean concept of 'seven ages' in the chorus.

    bob, it's hardly a love song... anyways glad that u guys liked it.
  6. DesiPride143

    DesiPride143 BEHAVE!

    and yet again, another great poem by mave.....
  7. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    And yet again, a very hearty praise from DP. thnx a lot, dude...
  8. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    It's cool Maverick.....
  9. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    thnx sanjay
  10. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    when are we getting the next one from U, mave?
  11. maverick8218

    maverick8218 New Member

    pretty soon i guess, sanjay

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