tried some lyrics, hope u find it good.. ------------------------ song for patriotism ------------------------ taza taza lahu tha ragon me.. iss dharti pe lutaya hai reh na jaaye koi kasar baaki katra-katra bahaaya hai kya matlab hai majhab se.. kaun jaane hai dharam uskaa shahidon se na pucho ye sawaaal.. woh jaane hai bass karam uskaa insaanon se nahi thi jung usne nafraton ko mitaya hai ek junoon tha watan ke liye uss junoon ko aajmaya hai .....taza taza..... na laana askq aankhon me, aansuon se inhe badnaam na karo kurbaaniyon ke sil-sile ko, gumon me gumnaam na karo naa gum kar uski bejaan laash pe woh mar ke amar ho paya hai aaj raakh banke jal raha hai chita pe par watan ka sir uthaya hai .....taza taza..... nafraton ki chingariya.. sarhaddon ki saajishe sarfaroshi ke kafan me.. shauryata ki numaayishe taza taza lahu tha ragon me.. iss dharti pe lutaya hai reh na jaaye koi kasar baaki katra-katra bahaaya hai .....taza taza.....
na laana askq aankhon me, aansuon se inhe badnaam na karo kurbaaniyon ke sil-sile ko, gumon me gumnaam na karo this above 2 lines r very nice anyways whole poem is gud i lost a very close fren in kargil i hope ppl dun forget da heroes who laid ther lives for bettr 2mro jai hind ::x
Those who for theri country die, fill an honoured grave For the glory lies at the soilders tomb, beauty weeps for the brave kisne kahatha i forgot .... accha attempt ....BAs hindi urdu ka amalgam bana diya hai..still good one
well ...its very nice...if you allow i want to compose this on guitar tabs...shabdo ko jab suro ka sath mil jata hai tab...iss tarah ki...panktiyon se josh aur bad jata hai....will wait for your reply
@sanju, madhuresh, pamposh, devilish, rohit, apurb thanks for going thru my poem... @rohit.. no tips.. its just luck that, out of my crappy things that i write, some sounds goog sometimes @mannu.. thanks. may be u shud pm me to discuss this.