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Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by nimisha, May 23, 2006.

  1. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    tried some lyrics, hope u find it good..
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    song for patriotism
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    taza taza lahu tha ragon me..
    iss dharti pe lutaya hai
    reh na jaaye koi kasar baaki
    katra-katra bahaaya hai

    kya matlab hai majhab se.. kaun jaane hai dharam uskaa
    shahidon se na pucho ye sawaaal.. woh jaane hai bass karam uskaa

    insaanon se nahi thi jung
    usne nafraton ko mitaya hai
    ek junoon tha watan ke liye
    uss junoon ko aajmaya hai
    .....taza taza.....

    na laana askq aankhon me, aansuon se inhe badnaam na karo
    kurbaaniyon ke sil-sile ko, gumon me gumnaam na karo

    naa gum kar uski bejaan laash pe
    woh mar ke amar ho paya hai
    aaj raakh banke jal raha hai chita pe
    par watan ka sir uthaya hai
    .....taza taza.....

    nafraton ki chingariya.. sarhaddon ki saajishe
    sarfaroshi ke kafan me.. shauryata ki numaayishe

    taza taza lahu tha ragon me..
    iss dharti pe lutaya hai
    reh na jaaye koi kasar baaki
    katra-katra bahaaya hai
    .....taza taza.....
     
  2. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e <3V/S<3 50 CeNt$

    na laana askq aankhon me, aansuon se inhe badnaam na karo
    kurbaaniyon ke sil-sile ko, gumon me gumnaam na karo

    this above 2 lines r very nice anyways whole poem is gud
    i lost a very close fren in kargil i hope ppl dun forget da heroes who laid ther lives for bettr 2mro

    jai hind ::x
     
  3. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    I can almost visualise Lata Mangeshkar performing this song on Republic day

    nice work.
     
  4. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    nice theme .. and very well written
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    Those who for theri country die, fill an honoured grave
    For the glory lies at the soilders tomb, beauty weeps for the brave
    kisne kahatha i forgot ....

    accha attempt ....BAs hindi urdu ka amalgam bana diya hai..still good one :)
     
  6. :nw: :nw: :nw: Oh...good one nimisha...reps for sure....very patriotic...
     
  7. astroguru26

    astroguru26 New Member

    nice as ever..............

    how do you write so nice? any tips......;)
     
  8. mixwith_mannu

    mixwith_mannu New Member

    well ...its very nice...if you allow i want to compose this on guitar tabs...shabdo ko jab suro ka sath mil jata hai tab...iss tarah ki...panktiyon se josh aur bad jata hai....will wait for your reply
     
  9. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    @sanju, madhuresh, pamposh, devilish, rohit, apurb
    thanks for going thru my poem...

    @rohit.. no tips.. its just luck that, out of my crappy things that i write, some sounds goog sometimes

    @mannu.. thanks. may be u shud pm me to discuss this.
     
  10. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    nimi...thats fantastic...
     
  11. mixwith_mannu

    mixwith_mannu New Member

    Hi nimi...i always c u offlline...how often do you surf dis...site...how can i discuss..
     
  12. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    u just pm me first.. i wil tel you in the pm..
     

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