Kya socha tha or kya ho gaya......

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by Garima, Jan 25, 2006.

  1. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    Wrote it long time back....dint post it for some reasons...but today I felt like posting it...

    Lab kuchh kehna chahte the
    Par lafzon ka saath chhoot gaya
    Tumhe pyar karma chahte the
    Par us se pehle hi ye dil toot gaya
    Bas aansoo hi nahi chhalke is aankh se
    Varna ab to ye dil tukdo me reh gaya
    Jo na kabhi socha tha sapne me
    Use bhi ye dil hakikat me chup-chap seh gaya
    Koshish to kiiā€¦ki kabhi is dil me bhi bahaar aaye
    Par ye dil banjar registaan hi bana reh gaya
    Hasna chahta tha ye dil tumhare saath
    Par wo lamha zindgi me aane se pehle hi hamse chin gaya
  2. rizaaj

    rizaaj Forum Leader

    nice one Garima .. great and touching start

    Lab kuchh kehna chahte the
    Par lafzon ka saath chhoot gaya
    one question.... where do you people get all this mind to write such stuff... i mean if we see it.. those are simple daily used words... but convey a lot
  3. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    ^^^ I always open ur poetry threads wid a handkerchief in hand .... :p:

    bt dis one didnt make me cry ........ as usually.... good one though ...... ;-)
  4. CrYpTiC_angel

    CrYpTiC_angel Rebelle!

    it's so awesome that u write beautifully in english as well as hindi unlike ppl like me :'(

    this one's also beautiful!
  5. shak

    shak Harrr!

    i have read a poem of yours very similar to this one .. feel as if this one is the continuation of that previous ones ....

    nicely done ... i will agree with rizaaj ..its a wonder how you guys can put your emotions into words this easily ...
    lemme see if i can rep you garry ..
  6. G. Srinivas

    G. Srinivas New Member

    Garima, Garima, really heart touching!

    Dil se paar ho jathi hai tumare sayari, sayad mohabbat ki alam se gujri ho, isliye chalkthi hai dil ki kusbu tumare alfaaz mein.

    Mera dil kehtha hai, ki mohabbat mein na gaam hota hai na kushi, jo bhi hota hai vaha kudha hota hai.

    Gaam huhi, dil tadpa, aansoon ****i, bas bahut roliya. Kudha ke diye huhe gaam ko pardha kar, uske diye huhe kushi ki pal jalkahu, bas hasta huha, hastha huha, mein chala jahu.
  7. Atom_bomb

    Atom_bomb Banned

    so senti poem this made me cry will you marry me i m looking for a bride
  8. abhimanjrekar

    abhimanjrekar ----&gt; Zhol-Man&lt;----

    wow..another nice u rock...
  9. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Rizaaj...thanks buddy...i wish i cud answer that question..:eek:: well, will try to find the answer :grin:

    @Apurba...gud to kno that u dint cry this time :p: ...thanks

    @Trish...Thanks yaar :grin:

    @Shak my buddy...its axactly the same(except the last line) that I PMd u that day...itz so gud to kno that u remember evn aftr so many days..:)

    @Srinivas....sahi farmaya aapne. thanks :)

    @Atom_bomb...errr:eek::...well, thanx for that..but....well...m outta words actually:eek::

    @Abhi....thanks :grin: & gud that u hv changed ur rocks:rock:
  10. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    again im late to ctach ur poem...
    but its worth of time...
    gr8 job garimaa.. this time ur rhyming is so good... :beer:
  11. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Daad kaboul kijiyega...Garima ! Aap ne bahout acha likha hai ! Dil main outar gaye har lafz...!

    Take care


  12. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Nimisha...its better to b late than never ;) thanks ALOT....always luking frwd for ur comments:)

    @Amanush :nw: :nw: thanks ALOT yaar
  13. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    damn! u make me think!
    and you know how hard is That for people like me :shock:

    your poems are like the strong wind's
    they make you move and grasp for support..

    kuch samjhi?
    you write well girl!!:)
  14. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Nice one dear...
    Keep writing..

  15. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    @Martina...:nw:...thanxx yarr
    @Zoom...Thanks for ur very first reply :):) keep visiting :grin:
  16. knight_guitar

    knight_guitar Lead Guitarist

    Garima.. u got good potential .. i want you to write "dark lyrics/poems" .. can't rep u otherwise would have repped ya.. but .. please try to write "dark" stuffs... cause poem forum is full of such poems ...
  17. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    ^^thanx Sharad....wud try to write such stuff....
  18. knights_diwani

    knights_diwani New Member

    Well am kinda new round catchin up with ur poems kinda late but hats got tears in ma eyes...n what uv written is jus like what im feelin rite now!

    Keep it up!....its fab
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    @ garima... simply awsome yaar!
  20. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    oooops....nice to see a reply...aftr so many days :)
    Thanks Fats ;)
    Hira thanx to u too....
    U two Gemies too huh....Gemies :rock: ;)

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