kya dekha, kya soocha, kya sumjha?

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by #iR@, Jan 21, 2006.

  1. #iR@


    hi everyone... another poem... but this time its different cause its in urdu! and i think its my FIRST ATTEMPT to rite a poem in urdu... really looking forward to ur posts cause its not that openly expressed... just some words with hidden meanings... hehe.. anyway.... hope u guyscan read this properly cause its ritten in minglish so... i know its hard! here goes........

     kya dekha, kya soocha, kya sumjha?

    Mein nay dekha tha;
    un bachoo ko bhook sey mertay hoyea
    Kya tum bhi wohi dekhtay ho, jo mein dekhti hoon?

    Mein nay suna tha;
    Un ghunghuruoon ki chahnkaar mein siskiyoun ko
    Kya tum bhi wohi suntay ho, jo mein sunti hoon?

    Mein ney sumjha tha;
    Key woh bey samuj gunga hai
    Kya tum bhi wohi sumujhatay ho, jo mein sumjhati hoon?

    i know its incomplete but still wanted to share it.... anyway... hope u guys understood it... don't forget to comment on it! thanks for reading! :)
  2. UjSen

    UjSen *#!EVIL*!!

    it reminds me of a song a song called "do u hear what i hear>"
  3. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    its a good attempt my dear
    but am not very lucky with the meanings :eek::

    are you gonna add something to it later?
  4. #iR@


    @ ujsen .... haven't heard that song, still thanksfor reading my poem

    @ bubbly... well i don't think i'll add to it but u never know :eek:: thanks anyway! :)
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    1 st thing their is not even a single word of urdu here ...
    idea is not clear..
    poem heads nowhere..!

    BUT and this is a big but ...a very honest try...... for ur 3 shers 3 cheers to gandi bacchi :)
  6. #iR@


    ^ :shock:

    uuummmm.......... thanks for the comments..... and thanks for the cheers! :)

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