kya dekha, kya soocha, kya sumjha?

hi everyone... another poem... but this time its different cause its in urdu! and i think its my FIRST ATTEMPT to rite a poem in urdu... really looking forward to ur posts cause its not that openly expressed... just some words with hidden meanings... hehe.. anyway.... hope u guyscan read this properly cause its ritten in minglish so... i know its hard! here goes........


 kya dekha, kya soocha, kya sumjha?


Mein nay dekha tha;
un bachoo ko bhook sey mertay hoyea
Kya tum bhi wohi dekhtay ho, jo mein dekhti hoon?

Mein nay suna tha;
Un ghunghuruoon ki chahnkaar mein siskiyoun ko
Kya tum bhi wohi suntay ho, jo mein sunti hoon?

Mein ney sumjha tha;
Key woh bey samuj gunga hai
Kya tum bhi wohi sumujhatay ho, jo mein sumjhati hoon?

i know its incomplete but still wanted to share it.... anyway... hope u guys understood it... don't forget to comment on it! thanks for reading!

 

it reminds me of a song a song called "do u hear what i hear>"

 

its a good attempt my dear
but am not very lucky with the meanings :

are you gonna add something to it later?

 

@ ujsen .... haven't heard that song, still thanksfor reading my poem

@ bubbly... well i don't think i'll add to it but u never know : thanks anyway!

 

1 st thing their is not even a single word of urdu here ...
idea is not clear..
poem heads nowhere..!

BUT and this is a big but ...a very honest try...... for ur 3 shers 3 cheers to gandi bacchi

 

^ :shock:


uuummmm.......... thanks for the comments..... and thanks for the cheers!