Badle jubaan baat ko, jumla-e-shayari main gar to apni iss aadat-ki bechaaragi main kush hain hum... Ek mausam bhar bhi nahi rukatee hain phool shaakh pe to apni dil ke jhaad ki aavargi main kush hain hum... koi humare daard pe hainsta hai to bhi theek hai iss bahane se shai, uss ki kushi main kush hain hum... ek uljhaan dusari ko dekh kar khud sulajh gayi uljhaano ki dosty aur muflasi main kush hain hum... kori shikaaytoon ka pulinda liye daurae jahan Beshiikayat chall rahi iss zindagi man kush hain hum... (jhaad:- here means a small plant like teree...i mean chota plant not jyada chota na bahuut bada...but definaltly wears flowers in certain seasons)
app ko ye faltu ki line acchi lagti hain to soochiye inhe soochene vala kaisa ho ga ?..... kisi ko face, kisi ko baal, kisi ko kandha, pasand aaya kisi ko bejaan lavzon se mera dhanda pasand aaya iss tarah baant gayi shakshiyaat cahane vaalon me dhoondate hain koi jo kahe "tu hume banda pasan aaya"
abey sab phatte maar rahe hain (martina n nimisha bhi :shock: ) ..MAHA BAKWAAS hain... manu baba kya ho gaya hain .. itney dino baad likha woh bhi ghatiya ... hehehe.. aur jhaad ka jhaad bana diya.. big tree is also called jhaad. write better next time.. kuch bhi kachra nahi :annoyed: n do correction's while u write hindi in english alphabets.. :annoyed: n these "pasand aaya" waali is full tharki sachoo
maaf kar diya ji bubbly ji..: ..hehehehe. phatte marna is sorta punjaabi slang. umm means gappe marna (gappe toh maloom hain na ). yaar kaise samzhaoo.. ok means lambi lambi phekana. got it dear. lekin aap hain kahan se?
LOL........aaphi ke sheher se ho sakti hu aur main phatte nahi maar rahi thi aapki pasand alag, humari pasand alag.. aapko sher pasand nahi aaya toh woh aapka masla hai.. kha-makha mera naam lene ki kya sujhi?? apka nazariya sher tak hi simit rakho... kisi aur ke khayaal ko sawaal karne ki zarurat nahi.. aur phirse agar meri baat pasand nahi aayi toh maaf kar dijiye ga..:
:hbr: .. theek hain yaar, nahi lenge aapka naam. itna jyaada gussa kyun ho rahe ho . muzhe kya pata ki aapko itna bura lag jaayega , mazaak kar raha tha aur hum kaun hote hain sawaal karne waale yaan maaf karne waale. Tht was so rude :cry2: ...
i'm so so so SO Sorry Sachoo but today i've been realy nasty... please dont feel bad about what i said... i'm really very sorrry.. i shouldnt have said that
@sacchoo....oye yee sher padha tune... ek uljhaan dusari ko dekh kar khud sulajh gayi uljhaano ki dosty aur muflasi main kush hain hum... "sher main hota hai kyaa aasar dekhiye Zara kagaz pe syahhi pher kar dehkiye kitni raateen kat jati hain ek jumla likne main Ek raat app bhi jaag kar dekhiye...."
sirf ek he raat... .. manu mere bhai wat i meant was tht this was not of ur standard. no disappointment but take it as negative motivation..: u do write nice, so i expect more :beer:
yaar yahi main bhi keh raha hoon ...ye sher meri aukaat ki paridhi pe kahada hai...... ek aur bahutt acchi line suni main ne to share karta hoon "Bas ek hi aadat hai, Saans lene ki " kehne vala jo bhi baat bahuut geheri keh gaya...aisa kuch likna chaahiye..hmm
