Title:- kuch nahi Kuch andaze bayyan atpata sa hai kuch lavz mere bevakoof se hain kuch main bhi chup chup rahtaan hoon kuch loog bhi sab masroof se hain koi duur gaya to khayaal aaya, vo paas hi tha to accha tha... ab ye saare sapney jhoothe hain main need main tah to saccha tha... har baar khuunga lekin tum kabhi chod ke mujh-ko mat jaana rookunga nahi, bas ye samjho mushlik hai ye sab samjhana... jyada bolna nahi aata bus ye kayaal subhe ki dhoop se hain Kuch andaze bayyan atpata sa hai kuch lavz mere bevakoof se hain kuch main bhi chup chup rahtaan hoon kuch loog bhi sab masroof se hain
ya the meanings should be told....so the poet says here the poet is confused with the words he says and the meanings they convey its a 3 layered process 1 what he says (andaze bayan :- style of saying) 2 layer is his words which tell something else no good vocab(lavz :- selection of words and the 3rd one is the conversation part where lisner needs pin pointed attempts and this person is fumbling with his pen...so from perception of thought in his mind to the mind of others he has a zigzag path fot his thought to flow .. koi duur gaya to khayaal aaya, vo paas hi tha to accha tha... ab ye saare sapney jhoothe hain main need main tah to saccha tha... here he says simple in 1st 2 lines but last two r intrustin ....Dreams all dreams r real when u r asleep adn u dont need this channel of converstion to talk their u feel things and tehy get transmitted to the other character in ur dream true feelings not the distorted truth a lie...so easy ...so he dosent wants to get out of sleep (need main tah to saccha tha).. har baar khuunga lekin tum kabhi chod ke mujh-ko mat jaana rookunga nahi, bas ye samjho mushlik hai ye sab samjhana... this one is only tomake the plot for the last lines which r the best ....maine ye kaise soocha main bhi nahi jaan ta..hahaha jyada bolna nahi aata bus ye kayaal subhe ki dhoop se hain u see the selection of words distorted.... just like waht happens to the poets thoughts when he tell to some one...... so he comes up the reverse way uses teh distorted words now and is making a fake try to get the meanings come true.....which is all like the sun rays in the morning .....symbolically on one side of them is dark night the other one is a hot shiny sunny arid ruthless day....his thoughts r some where in between both these extremes... bus
Bohot hi aacha likha hai aapne.. :rock: Mushkil hai bayan karna ki kitni hai muhobat tumse,tum lakh chaho na honge hum dur aapse,chahe woh aapka ek suhana sapna hi kyu na ho
@sweetie....thanks... hey ye kyaa ho raha hai...i know a girl whose name is nimisha her nick name is sweety....abhi agar yaha ek silky(her sis) aur aagayi to inthaa hi ho jaye gi ...humm u r definatly from london varna 2:30 5:30 a.m ko kisi ko reply karna indian ladki ka kaam to nahi hoo sakta @sharmon....their was another meaning to the poem ...sweety ji ne samajh liya....aur app ko accha laga mera likhna safal hoo gaya..
Haanji hoon to london se hi or indian bhi..So as an Indian i can reply at Uk Time which is early morning there.. : By the way I dont have any sis
@knight_ki....THaaN KUU..... @sweety :- "Haan ji" delhi-chandigarh ke beech ki rehne vali ....part time poet...thoda khaaboon main thoda reality main jeene vali ..... practical but soft-hearted....long hairs ...white complection and straight teeth.....kitan right hoon main ???
@sweety...hhaha leave it...vo main kabhi kabhi tukka marta huun kisi ko bina dhekhe us ka description...leave it leave ...i confess silly haaan @bubbly ji :- abhi to app meri baat bhi maan-ne lagi... @amanush yarr tu sahi kehta hai ....wasting lot of time of my self and urs too...abhi se keval kaam ki baaat bas
