Hello everyone.... Wrote this after my exams got completed.... read n feedback much appreciated... I have chosen this title... but other suggestions are also welcomed... Duur bhag kar kya karogi in khusyoon se… Kabhi sivakar karke to dekho… Har mod par nai rah hai… Kabhi aazmakar to dekho… Jindagi ek nadi si hai… Kabhi stir to kabhi achal hai… Apni kashti kabhi isme utar kar to dekho… Kinara to milhi jayega… Roj ek nayi subah hoti hai… Naya shitiz nayi hawayen hoti hai… In nayi lehro mein kho kar to dekho… Jindagi badi suhani lagti hai… In badlon ki aur dekho… Kabhi na rukhte hai… Bikhar jate hai yeh yuhi… Phir laut aane ko-humesha… Is dil ki band muthi mein kya samete hua ho? Kabhi humse keh kar to dekho… Na samaj paye agar hum to… Duur ho jayenge aapki jindagi se… Yuh khushiyoon ko aapni jindagi se ruksat na karo… Thodi humare saath bat kar to dekho… Aapke liya is dil mein fikar hoti hai… Kabhi iske bare mein soch kar to dekho… Aur kuch hum kehna nahi chahte…is dil ko rulakar… Aap samaj saki to khushi varna gum… REgards, Zooom..!!
i remember the air-tel song.. ................................. Nigahen nigahon se mila kar toh dekho, Naye logon se rishta bana kar toh dekho. Hasratein dil mein dabane se kya haasil hoga, Apne hoth hila kar toh dekho. Khamoshi se kab hoti hai khwahishein poori, Dil ki baat bata kar toh dekho. Jo hai dil mein usey kar do bayaan, Khud ko ek baar jata kar toh dekho. Aasmaan simat jayega tumhare aaghosh mein, Chahat ki bahein phaila kar toh dekho. Dil ki baat bata kar toh dekho. .......................................... good thought shalabh.. poem lacks bit rhythm. n rhyme somewhere.. but nice expression.. reps for u.
Samajh sako to sab kuch na samjho to kuch bhi nahi nice variation of thoughts in one poem Keep writing!
quite a few tough words (well, as per my hindi standards) its good, and I think no need to change the title btw, I hate italics, it hurts my eyes
