Kuch baat hai tum mein ayesi

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by amit82cse, Jan 30, 2006.

  1. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    kuch baat hai tum mein ayesi
    dil mera khicha chala jaaye
    saat samundar dur bhi
    yaad badi sataye

    Chehre pe vo saad gi
    aankhon mein vo apna pan
    haath bada ke chu loon
    dil karta mera ye sanam

    jab bhi baithoon likhne main
    ye pyaar bhara khat
    uljha rahta huin itna
    likhna paauein ek bhi shabd

    saath tumhare bas rahna cha huin
    pal pal saath jiina cha huin
    saari khushi tumhe dena cha huin
    saare gum tumhare apnana cha huin

    kah do tum bhi ek bar
    karti ho hum se pyar
    dil ye khusi se jhum uthe ga
    ek aur deewana jeene lage ga

    hows it guys...please do comment...
     
    amit82cse, Jan 30, 2006
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  2. prashant_soni14

    prashant_soni14 New Member

    nice dude....................yaar bhot yaad aa rahi the kya??? :))
     
    prashant_soni14, Jan 30, 2006
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  3. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    abe ek yaad jaaye gi tabhi to doosri yaad aayegi :)
     
    amit82cse, Jan 30, 2006
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  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    nice...feel like typical hindi song..
     
    nimisha, Jan 31, 2006
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  5. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    thanks...i am try hard to improve...next poem you will definitely not find filmy..promise :)
     
    amit82cse, Jan 31, 2006
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