Kshitij ke us paar..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, Apr 26, 2006.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Kshitij ke us paar-
    .......Kshitij ik aur bhi hai ?

    Uchi minaaron se aawaze hai goonji
    Mukhalif fizaon main khamoshi hai khili
    Jo karti hain lehre pehra raet ki mehelon ki
    Tanhaiyon ki saugaat woh khudme dafan kar chuki

    Door ik kshitij lehron main teherne laga
    Ik umeed ki kiran main jhilmilane laga
    Faisla karna mushkil tha
    Lehre sama rahi kshitij main
    Ya kshitij nigal ja raha hai lehron main

    Bin saahil ik kashti doob rahi thi
    Baarish ki fuwaaro main seher bheeg rahi thi
    Ye anth nahi ik aaghaz tha anjaam ka
    Bekhauff ubharta aaftaab ik ishaara tha
    Duniya main qillat-e-pyar ka



    Kshitij=the horizon
    Aaftaab= the sun
    Qillat=shortage or lack of something

    i've stopped answering questions related to my poems
    so i'l leave it to your imagination as to what the poem depicts

    Thanks for reading..
    Do gimme your honest comments..
  2. zoomingrocket

    zoomingrocket TeChNiCaL AdMiNiStRaToR

    Beautiful Lines..
    Beautiful poem...
    Keep writing!

  3. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    oye tune kamaal kiya hai yaar....saal main comment nahi karna chahata but ye ajeeb sa hai....aree poti ye words aisa nahi use hote hain...
    "Ya kshitij nigal ja raha hai lehron main"
    "Duniya main qillat-e-pyar ka"
    Maine aisa kabhi nahi suna ........HAHAHA this is funny
  4. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Another wonderful poem from Bubbly!

    I've alwayz liked these type of positive poems..... keep writing more....
  5. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM


    @ Manu-
    I wont explain..let things be unsaid and unexplained..
    "dimag ki batti jalao" in other words :p:

    Thanks dear...glad you like it..

    i always try to positive..when i'm successful.. sometimes it shows, sometimes it doesnt ;)
    Thanks for your comments

    Appreciate you'l reading my poem..
  6. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    mere deemag main bulb hai hi nahi ...to jalaunnga kyaa ...haha
    hey do u belive in ghosts ?.....(alredy know u r not satanic but i still dont belive)
  7. Sanjay Mazumder

    Sanjay Mazumder ~..::MASTERMIND::..~

    Hey Bubbly U are counting down to Wedding......

    Is it ur Wedding? :)
  8. souman_das

    souman_das New Member

    hi bubbly,
    nice work.

    reps for you.

  9. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    Honestly, ek bar pad ke complete samjh mein nahi aayi because of too many complex words (you can say its completely my fault, I am not good with urdu words). But first reading mein hi kuch lines dil ko touch kar gayiien..ye lines hain...

    Lehre sama rahi kshitij main
    Ya kshitij nigal ja raha hai lehron main

    Oh my god...I just can't imagine how deep you must be in thoughts while writting these lines...

    I love the word quillat...its so cute:p:

    Why the way what is this Wedding Countdown :think:

    awesome work..keep it up..
  10. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    hehe..the word quillat is cute? :p
    Thanks Amit!
    dont wanna sound monotonous but,
    Apprecitate you reading my poem..

    PS-well there is a Wedding coming up,...and i didnt have any other countdown..therfore
  11. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    lol...already answered that question...

    Thanks Souman..
    the comments are more than enough, thanks for the reps though
  12. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    ye wedding count down ka kya chakkar hai ?
    Bubbly ji hume bhi bulaiye ga......*Free ki ice cream khaaye bahuut din ho gaye*
  13. Amanush...

    Amanush... Tanha Rahi...!

    Dear Martina...!

    My comments for you nice poem is imparted in this one...

    You see that line of horizon
    it seems so fragile and thin
    but it clearly divides
    the sky and the sea.

    I will look at it till my last day
    because from it I want to learn
    how dreams are detached
    from the reality…

    Hope you like it...!


  14. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    Lehre sama rahi kshitij main
    Ya kshitij nigal ja raha hai lehron main...

    so beautiful thoughts..!!
  15. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    That was jus too beautiful for me to have
    thanks Amanush
    its perfect:)

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