Kshitij ke us paar- .......Kshitij ik aur bhi hai ? Uchi minaaron se aawaze hai goonji Mukhalif fizaon main khamoshi hai khili Jo karti hain lehre pehra raet ki mehelon ki Tanhaiyon ki saugaat woh khudme dafan kar chuki Door ik kshitij lehron main teherne laga Ik umeed ki kiran main jhilmilane laga Faisla karna mushkil tha Lehre sama rahi kshitij main Ya kshitij nigal ja raha hai lehron main Bin saahil ik kashti doob rahi thi Baarish ki fuwaaro main seher bheeg rahi thi Ye anth nahi ik aaghaz tha anjaam ka Bekhauff ubharta aaftaab ik ishaara tha Duniya main qillat-e-pyar ka ---`-,--;--<@ _____________________ Kshitij=the horizon Mukhalif=varied Aaftaab= the sun Qillat=shortage or lack of something i've stopped answering questions related to my poems so i'l leave it to your imagination as to what the poem depicts Thanks for reading.. Do gimme your honest comments..
oye tune kamaal kiya hai yaar....saal main comment nahi karna chahata but ye ajeeb sa hai....aree poti ye words aisa nahi use hote hain... "Ya kshitij nigal ja raha hai lehron main" "Duniya main qillat-e-pyar ka" Maine aisa kabhi nahi suna ........HAHAHA this is funny
Another wonderful poem from Bubbly! I've alwayz liked these type of positive poems..... keep writing more....
*Bows* @ Manu- I wont explain..let things be unsaid and unexplained.. "dimag ki batti jalao" in other words : @Zoom Thanks dear...glad you like it.. @Sanjay i always try to positive..when i'm successful.. sometimes it shows, sometimes it doesnt Thanks for your comments Appreciate you'l reading my poem..
mere deemag main bulb hai hi nahi ...to jalaunnga kyaa ...haha hey do u belive in ghosts ?.....(alredy know u r not satanic but i still dont belive)
Honestly, ek bar pad ke complete samjh mein nahi aayi because of too many complex words (you can say its completely my fault, I am not good with urdu words). But first reading mein hi kuch lines dil ko touch kar gayiien..ye lines hain... Lehre sama rahi kshitij main Ya kshitij nigal ja raha hai lehron main Oh my god...I just can't imagine how deep you must be in thoughts while writting these lines... I love the word quillat...its so cute: Why the way what is this Wedding Countdown :think: awesome work..keep it up..
hehe..the word quillat is cute? Thanks Amit! dont wanna sound monotonous but, Apprecitate you reading my poem.. PS-well there is a Wedding coming up,...and i didnt have any other countdown..therfore *cough*
lol...already answered that question... Thanks Souman.. the comments are more than enough, thanks for the reps though
ye wedding count down ka kya chakkar hai ? Bubbly ji hume bhi bulaiye ga......*Free ki ice cream khaaye bahuut din ho gaye*
Dear Martina...! My comments for you nice poem is imparted in this one... You see that line of horizon it seems so fragile and thin but it clearly divides the sky and the sea. I will look at it till my last day because from it I want to learn how dreams are detached from the reality… Hope you like it...! Amanush...
