koi..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, May 17, 2010.

  1. razo deenar koi ilam aitabaar koi
    kis bahane se kare aavaragi se pyaar koi
    aye mere dost teri shayrana fitart hia
    tere lavozoon ka bhala kaise kare aitabaar koi..

    jiski chaahat ne tere itne din gujaar diye
    Uss ke sang raat bhi gujaar koi..

    uss ke maathe pe jab-se lagi hai bindi
    tere sar se bhi utara hia udahaar koi..

    pass ho to apne hone ki khabar de dena
    kareeb aane ko naih hai, abb tayiyaar koi..

    razo deenar koi ilam aitabaar koi
    kis bahane se kare aavaragi se pyaar koi
    aye mere dost teri shayrana fitart hia
    tere lavozoon ka bhala kaise kare aitabaar koi..


    Razo denaar :royal currency
    ilm :knoledge
     
  2. nandy0894

    nandy0894 New Member

    whoa!!!! it is simply awesm nd enthralling...a great piece...!!
     
  3. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    its just awesome....
    n good u clarified.....those wer some words i'd neva heard....
    reps.........if i can.....
     
  4. allstarsband

    allstarsband New Member

    wow!
    i'm an urdu student myself n these words r rilly nice.
    gr8 job!
     
  5. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    nice 1 monica....u're awesome!
     
  6. Thanks all..
     
  7. XxeRoxX

    XxeRoxX New Member

    Good Work

    So when your goin to On Air this ;)

    --
    XxeRoxX
     
  8. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    very very neat piece. Took some reading it due to "urdu" written in "english"
     
  9. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    u seem to be well versed with urdu ... is it?
     
  10. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**


    Iam from Kashmir, My grandfather was urdu -to-hindi translater, my dad studied urdu till college and I kinda understand it little.
     
  11. thanks people

    yes bout the language ... hindi english or urdu ... they all have their own merits...i odnt think i culd have said this in any other language..vaise bhi urdu aasan si hia !!
     
  12. walk_alone

    walk_alone **~~| An Atheist |~~**

    its good that u find urdu easy, people spend ages in getting good at it.
     
  13. its a very flowery language aur syaalbles bhi to kuch hi groubs main hian so kafiye arram se ban jaate hian...who says urdu is mushkil?
     
  14. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^ me does...
     
  15. rickkkyrich

    rickkkyrich Guest

    very nice...
     
  16. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    it was so lyrical.. good work
     
  17. opps.... ye dekho kaun aaya hai

    hi welcome back

    gud to see u
     

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