Koi Toh Aisa Tareeqa Hoga

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by arpi, Mar 18, 2006.

  1. arpi

    arpi New Member

    dil ka dhadhakna band ho jaaye
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    kadvee yaadein yaad na aayein
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    jo dil mein basay, wo zindagi mein utar jaiye
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    pyar karne walay, kabhi juda na rahein
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    duniya ki rusme ishq ki rAh mein deewar na banein
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    iqraar-e-ishq karne se darr na lagay
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    humpe bhi maray woh jispe hum marr mittay
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    naqaam mohabbat pe dil na roye
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    behti aankhon ke aansoo nazar na aayein
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    dil ka dard dil hi mein duffn ho jaiye
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    seene mein yunh dard ki aag na lagay
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    dil ke zukhm kabhi koi dekh na paiye
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    khud zukhmi hoke bhi dil humein dukh na de
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga


    dil-e-ghayal pe murham ka asar ho jaiye
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    ya phir kambakht yeh dil hi na rahay
    koi toh aisa tareeqa hoga

    -arpi
     
  2. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&*$@*^$

    ^^Raw feelings ...kinda refreshing to read ;-)

    btw welcome to IGT....
     
  3. arpi

    arpi New Member

    hmmm thanx...for commenting on my sher and for welcoming me to IGT :)

    -arpi
     
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  4. nimisha

    nimisha .:Forum Leader:.

    welcome again arpi...
    good poem...
    but dear...dont try to concentrate on words n rhyming only...
    keep one theme flowing throught ur poetry naturally..
    dont force poetry to be lengthy...unless its descriptive...
     
  5. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    haha
    sab cheejon ke tariquae hain dunia main ................
    i sincerly like the people who say "iska koi na koi tariqa ho ga"
    ye bahuuuuuuuuuuuuuut innocent poem hai
    and i like innocence ;)
    keep it up
     
  6. souman_das

    souman_das New Member

    hi arpi,
    i agree with what madhuresh said.
    very cute and innocent thoughts.

    reps for you.
    keep writing, i am sure one day you would come up with something that is never heard or said in IGT.

    god bless you.


    regards,
    Souman
     
  7. amit82cse

    amit82cse Silent observeR

    very very nice...

    Dil se dil ka paigaam yuin hi pahuch jaaye
    Koi to aisa tarikaa ho ga...

    Unke aane se pahle unki aahat aa jaye
    Koi to aisa tarikaa ho ga...
     

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