koi to ho

herez another attempt by me.... :




mere in behte ashqon ka
meri is dil ki dhadkan ka, poochne wala
koi to ho

mere is gham ke samandar ka
meri is tanha halat ka, poochne wala
koi to ho

kare jo mujhko sacha pyar
jaye jiske agay dil haar, zameen par aisa
koi to hooooooooo...

how'z that ??:

 

9 views n still no response...? come on ppl...it took me 15 mins to think and write this poem !! :

 

lol....lemme b the first one to post ...again...:

nice words & nice thots...if u dint receive it in a sms :annoyed: :

 

good try.. !!! dude.. enjoy .. ..

 

lol thnxx ppl 4 ur comments...
@garima.... itz my own n original...

 

then toh u shud get some reps from me for that....for being original this time ....lol.

 

lol thnx 4 da reps...

 

aaila....kaun dhoka diya tereko in 15 mins??????/??????...hehe...acha hain acha hain....

 

lolz... ^^thnx