Kobita o gaan

@ neel pori ... ur ritin style reminds me of sumbody ... but let dat b a mstry ... like u ...

 

thanx 4 comin 2 dis thread guys ... all thanx 2 neel_pori ... dis thread was almost DeaD ...

 

Esob ki?? Arekkhana sukumar ray dekhchhi.

 

keno amar sorochito gaan ki khoob-ii bajey???

 

KE BOLE BAAJE?? amar to bere lagchhe.......:rock:

BGT te tahalka machiye diyechho dekhchhi..... :beer:

NEXT STEP: ei gan gulo ke record kore pathao......surer sathe aro phataphati hobe.....

 

Kolkata Kemon Acho?

This is my 1st poem from "Swapner Shohor" Mumbai ...

Code:

             Kolkata Kemon Acho?


Aaj aami ekla boshe
Ochena ei char deowale
Shei deowale pith, haat-e guitar ... Gaichhi gaan

Melamoy "Swapner Shohor"
Jhholmole rod AC-r opor
Pepsi-r garite muchki heshe Shah Rukh Khan

BEST bus hochche pass
Gorom footpath-e thanda chaas
Khunje firi hoye jibonto laash - Bangla Gaan

Kolkata Kemon Acho?
Aami bhalo achhi, Tumi bhalo theko
Tomar jonno korchhe mon-pran anchaan

 

Bah. Daarun hoyechhe.

 

durdanto hoyechhe......probasi bangalir feelings bhasay khub sundor prokash korechho....:rock:

 

thanx debankan n lucifer ...
ei kobita-ta jedin mumbai-te prothom ashi shedin dupure likhechhilam ... but etodin post korini karon ei thread-tae keu astoi naa ... i'm d happiest 1 dat dis thread iz active again ...

 

Ei morechhe. Post na korle active hobe kottheke?

 

shadhe ki ami paranoid ...

 

hey nice poem paranoid has feelings in it...keep it up

 

good chora.
mumbai teh pepsi r gari nei sune kharap laglo.:cry1:tobe bhalo chora.

 

@himika9 ... thanx ... but y rn't u ritin? ... i luv urz huh ... specially dis 1 - "The city of Joy,
The city of sorrow
Driving down the memory lane "
gr8 ...
r tomar avatar-e ota ke - tumi na aishwarya rai na tomar anka aishwarya rai ?


@lefty ... thanx 2 u 2 ... but ami kokhon bollam je mumbai-te pepsi-r gari nei? besh ache ... amader bari-r niche roj ashe ... ekhon shah rukh iz replaced by Kareena & Priyanka ...

 

lol rohan...amar avatar e aishwaria rai ache but ota amar akak noy...

 

Y Rn't U Ritin???

samjha ... but i didn't get d ans 2 d more imprtnt qstn - Y RN'T U RITIN???

 

im not writing these days cuz first of all im out of ideas right now and hey i promise i will write one by the end of june

 

hey im out of ideas emni te likhi na 2 to likhechilam andaje dhil mere... but haan as abar likhbo after june

 

chor chor chor chor
dhor dhor dhor dhor
keu tara koro
paliye jachhe
amar bou-er duto minu saree niye jachhe
amar ekta sonar botam,khadims juto sob niye palalo
keu dhoro oke
chor chor chor chor
dhor dhor dhor dhor

 

dhorchi dhorchi dhorchi ...

dhorchi dhorchi dhorchi ...

tor ei odbhut kobita gulo byapok lage aamar ...

khub shighri aamio ekta erokom kichu postkorbo ...