Well! pls comment how is it. My first poem got quite a few repiles here and I got some nice tips also to improve my writing ....dont know If I have been able to understand all... But I can guess where I stand now from your comments abt this one ... so pls post ... Killing me again…. -------------------------- Haven’t I told you dear? let me live with these tears let me be in this black let me enjoy the time I spend killing me slowly and fast Haven’t I begged you dear? don’t come so closer don’t hold me with your caring arms don’t wipe my tears away and make me weaker Haven’t I always been? a man so stubborn and mean did I care for anyone who loved me? and love anyone who cared for me? Now that life has moved on I find myself so lost! Now that I can’t cry anymore Can’t sleep in the dark Now all those days seems so lost When I used to kill myself slowly and fast So many times……
Not my kinda stuff,.... Its very dangerous with feelings n all kinds..... But cool,.. reps comin up for ya!!
