khuda ka heartbreak...

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by born2tab, Nov 26, 2006.

  1. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    Jab khuda ne pyaar karna sikha hi diya
    toh pyar nibhana bi sikha deta,
    jab aati aapki yaad toh,
    palkon ko jhukana bhi sikha deta,
    har bande ko mallom hai ki nahi,
    dil main woh dard hai jiski dava nahi..
    duniya main sab kuch hain magar...
    aurat mein wafa nahi..

    Mujhe kyon aisa lagta hai ke,
    khuda ne jis din ishq banaya hoga,
    toh apne aap par bhi zaroor azmaya hoga,
    arre insaan to insaan,
    Is ishq ne toh khuda ko bhi bahut rulaya hoga...

    Isliye jab hasinao ka kafila mandir ki taraf ja raha tha
    humne unhe apni taraf bulaa liya
    kyonki hum to barbaad ho hi chuke hai dosto
    par khuda ko barbaad hone se bacha liya


    Me back from the the drains of hatred..comments please:slap:
     
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  2. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    kya yaaron!!! no comments or bahut hi gandi poem hai:eek::
     
  3. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    :RollLol:

    Aurat mein Akal bhi nahi dost .. :p
     
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  4. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    You are so DEAD !!
     
  5. Varshita

    Varshita New Member

    Wont debate on the gender issue.... But nice flow of thoughts :)
     
  6. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e <3V/S<3 50 CeNt$



    banglore may wine shop nahi hain kya ?







    :grin::grin:
     
  7. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    How true...:secret:

    And thanks bro!! for the reps..
     
  8. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    Thanks Varshita....;)
     
  9. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    Wine shop to hai bro!!!!

    But jab hangover khatam ho gaya to ye poem likhi;)
     
  10. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    I think it would have suited it better....cos evry heart has a story to tell...'irrespective of the gender'...its just that whn we go thru some bad experiences....we tend to judge everyone on the same scale...which is not right....i think every individual get a fair chance...
    anyway...m here not to comment on anybody's 'thought' but at the same time would like to put forward a 'fact'...
    Nice poem though...keep them coming in....
     
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  11. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    now m waiting for the board exams to tk place...then the result to come out...and the newspapers to b published aftr a nation-wide survey to see who's who....:think:
     
  12. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    ^Intelligence and Educational mastery are two different things ..

    "The only thing that stops me from learning is my Education" ~ Sir Albert Einstein

    Aurat buri bala .. Uske chakkar mein ma ki aankh Taj Mahal tak khade ho gaye .. saala ..
     
  13. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    sahi hai dost...is support :beer:

    and born2tab :- nice flow !
     
  14. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    so nxt time when u write somethng in Hindi...please be specific..as 'akal' wud include both of these thngs,,,its onli in Enlish in whch we can differentiate...thats y English IS a funny language...

    anyway....no more agruement on this topic...as its easy to change ur own perception...but if u show a mirror to someone else...all they cud find is 'perfection' ...

    so :beer:....
     
  15. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    See .. That's the reason I said Gals are unintelligent ..

    All the guys got the meaning behind it .. but you wanted differentiation and didn't understand hahaha ..

    Phas gayi na apne hi trap mein :p
     
  16. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    Arre...yaaron....no gender issues here...was jus kiddin...jus wanted to force ma frustartion out....so came out with this poem...

    But are all girls alike...:mad:

    vo kehtein hain na...

    e kaash kahin aisa hota ki do dil hote seene main
    ek toot bhi jaata ishq mein to taklif na hoti jeene mein:eek::
     
  17. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist


    may b gariz..u are true..but life has taught me the other way round:eek::

    N e way well said...reps for you....for speaking up ya mind:p: ..
    but as notty said...aurat mein akal(mind) kahan:p:
     
  18. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Its SEENEY mein .. not Jeene mein .. lol
     
  19. born2tab

    born2tab rhythm guitarist

    abey its not seeney mein...its jeene mein...:mad:
    jab takleef hoti hai to jeene mein...seene mein nahin...i meant not physical pain but the pain of livin without her:annoyed:
     
  20. notty_lad

    notty_lad sudo undress

    Oh yeah its Jeeney mein ..

    The more I try to hide it the more it comes forth .. I'm ageing .. cryptic :'(
     

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