khelne aati hunn..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Jun 9, 2009.

  1. mujhe kal bahar ja kar
    ek bheed ko chalna sikhana hai
    raaha batani hia janglee khatroon se bach kar chalne ki
    anne vaali nadiyonn ki, moojon main kaise utrain
    kese beh jayain kabhi, kase gaat laga shikaar karain
    main thoda dari sehmi si andar gehma gehmi si
    chupchaap bed se tahandi farsh pe ja soo jati hunn
    aye mere nahne dost sapnonn ke ruk, main bhi kehlane aati hunn..
     
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    acccha likha hai
     
  3. Ali Yawar

    Ali Yawar New Member

    Roohani nazm...wah..!

    Its awesome,i can only say this in reply....
    Mai bhi dard ka mara hoon,chalo saath tumhare main bhi chaloon
    kuch ashk tumhare ponchoonga,kuch apne aansoo pee loonga.
    Sapnay mein khelte jatey hue ek sadaa mujhe bhi de denaa
    shayad isi bahane main bhi,pal do pal ko jee loonga.....

    Ali..

    Again.... saubhanallah..bahut umdaa likha hai..mukarrar..
     
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    you're such a great user of themes and blend those with great words...
    love it!
     
  5. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    i love this style of writing...reps added !
     
  6. metalhead_junky

    metalhead_junky New Member

    ahhh...can't rep
     

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