Hey guys I am posting this one again.........actually before I posted it in the wrong forum i.e the hindi lyrics forum. This is my first try at hindi lyrics..........think they are ok...............but reallt looking forward coments & critique from u people..............here go the lyrics. Chup hum rahe Kuch naa kahe Dil phir sune yeh khamoshiah Baithen rahe yuhi khoye rahe tumme Paagal kare yeh madhoshiah Yuhi mulakate hoti rahe Chahe bhi aur kya hum iske siva Jaane kahaa se hum aaye hain Jaane kahaa ko hum jaayenge Dil yeh ise hai kuch naa pataa Kaise ise hum samjhayenge Chup hum rahe Kuch naa kahe Dil phir sune yeh khamoshiah Baithen rahe yuhi khoye rahe tumme Paagal kare yeh madhoshiah Yuhi mulakate hoti rahe Chalta rahe yeh silsila Har pal tumhe hum dekha kare Rahe tera chehra har pal saamne Dil yeh ise par nahi hai pataa Ke dhalne laga hai yeh tere pyaar mein
its like a typical hindi song.. plain.. repetitive.. ordinary.. may be alterations in it can make it a nice song.. but as poetry its too dull
hey thanx for the comments nimisha............... i aapreciate ur honest comments.......they do tell me if i am on the right track. I went through a couple of ur poems .............U write beautiful.......esspecially the hindi ones Ill do better job next time ......................lol
