Kehti hai boondein..

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by BubblyMartini, Jun 23, 2006.

  1. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Kehti hai boondein..

    Aaj kuch kehti hai boondein humse
    Kuch behti hai hawa aise
    Phir kyon na hum jhoom jaye
    Aachal ko bhool jaye
    Badan ko sehmi sehmi
    Boodein yu halki halki
    Choomte hue ghulti hai
    Saanson se khelti hai

    Befikr jhoolte hue
    Gunchon se pankhudi bole
    Chale chal mujhko dole
    Aasmaan pe aaj baadal chaaye
    Kuch andaza na humko aaye
    Kyo hai palkein mundein
    Falak se hum baatein bolen
    Hum dole kuch na bole

    Ghungrune jo hum na keh sake
    Woh raaz khole
    Baadal bhi gurrate
    Dharti main khudko sama jaye
    Paani humpar kuch yu gir jaye
    Woh bhi yaad aaye
    Ashk paani main mil jaye
    Phir hisaab kaun rakhe
    Kitna kaun bhiga
    Kitna kisne bhigaya

    Aaj woh khuda bhi pighal gaya
    Dharti pe paani jo barsa
    Tarasti mitti par chalka
    Na bhulege ye
    Kehti hai ghata
    Lautegi ye phir
    Chaye ge baadal phir
    Par woh nahi lautege
    Fasane likh jati hai
    Fizayen jiski har bar
    Madham ho rahi baarish bhi
    Ye kehti hai...


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    well.....its been raining here:)
    and i wrote down some lines to describe it

    Do gimme your honest comments
    Thanks for reading..
     
  2. madhuresh

    madhuresh madhuresh

    pure and fresh ...aisa hi likha karo ...
     
  3. sanju_strings

    sanju_strings 50 Pai$e &lt;3V/S&lt;3 50 CeNt$

    dun worry im waiting wen flood come in so u will write a new poem again :)


    well about this poem well last paragraph too gud in n all poem is gud too

    get some more soon ^^
     
  4. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    lol....why flood?!!? :p
    my part of the city/county wont flood ever..i guess

    but
    thanks for your comments Sanju
    its appreciated!:)
    and do drop in your comments, they are quite helpful
     
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  5. Garima

    Garima Born to rule <img src="images/smilies/rule.gif" bo

    hmmm....though its not raining here in Delhi...but ur poem was guud enuf to creat a thrill of rain....gooooood one :rock:
     
  6. anshphenomenon

    anshphenomenon Rape me :boff:

    good one!!
     
  7. BubblyMartini

    BubblyMartini !!!HAWM

    Thanks garima
    and
    thanks for your comments Ansh ; ;)

    thanks for reading..:)
     
  8. apurbajd

    apurbajd ~#$&amp;*$@*^$

    ^nice one ...kinda got me nostalgic for some reasons..;-)
     
  9. skaw

    skaw snooze

    nice. i don't really know what to criticise about it - seems great.
     

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