keep smiling, keep standing !

Discussion in 'Poetry and Lyrics Forum' started by monica_decosta, Jan 18, 2009.

  1. Tomorrow is always bigger than today
    'cause the innocent fellow never knows his way
    dauntlessly it goes to end without defending
    i have seen before
    in books Tv and more
    its always a happy ending
    along the curves its bending
    although lights they are sending
    so keep smiling, keep standing !
  2. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    It really seems that the poems you write are for you.I don't mean it in a bad's actually good.Rather than being,people-pleasing they seem to be personal in nature.I mean,some expressions..they sorta seem like they'll make sense only to you...or someone who has had experiences like you.
    I got some idea of what this poem is about...but this is the third I'm reading and it's like your poems are sorta unique.Kinda remind me of madhuresh (old poet here).
  3. ^wow.... all's r the same, whats thier in the the game !
    waht ever you think is personnel is only your lack of knoledge... we all are sooo many and so similar that all expriences we call personnel are some of the very general things...

    This thought i was playing around with for a while "Similarity as an idea, is lack of thoughts" eg: if i tell u to draw circles similar to a polo( mint with a hole) on the other hand ask u to draw cirles dissimilar to a polo .....which task is easier...?

    waht say ?
  4. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^u're an intricate web....

    keep going in circles 'til u get dizzy

    however I cud help no more than 2 say "I agree wid u"
  5. i'm_not_neo

    i'm_not_neo el valor máximo absoluto

    Hahahaha..I must say I'm soooo *BUSTED*..I mean my whole "seems personal" as a cover-up for my ignorance.So true.Really.*BUSTED*
    (P.S: I didn't get the polo mint analogy.But I've learnt my lesson and I'll admit it than go "that seems personal :p:)
    I'd love it if you explained your poem..not this one..the Jeans with Chappals(?) one. I know explaining poems is like narrowing the possibilities,but if you don't mind,I'd like to know.
  6. whatever ... some like erotica some like ornP... both can be justified.
    lets say im erotica...let things be if they r for good.
  7. horsesmouth

    horsesmouth Active Member

    ^m not used 2 reading words reversed....u introduced a concept here...

    'bout that polo, I'd rather it'd b easy 2 draw circles dissimilar 2 a polo......m not good at geometry, specially symmetricity......
  8. detritus

    detritus New Member

    this entire thread just went over my head

    sweet that rhymed
  9. bjr

    bjr Lady of the Evening

    yes, you're a poet and you didn't even know it.

    woo that rhymed too
  10. detritus

    detritus New Member

    Oh I knew, didn't you?


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