Mera har sher usi se mansub ho ye zaruri to nahi Mere halaat ke zimmedar kayi aur bhi hai Ye maante hai hume ishq ek tujhi se hai Tere shaher me hamare sanaa khwaa kayi aur bhi hai Saqi gar ek khafa hai humse to koi baat nahi Es basti mein mainkhane kayi aur bhi hai Ishq hi nahi hai rog duniya mein la-ilaaj Yaha aise hazaro marzat kayi aur bhi hai EK tere sabab nahi hai kaleja mera zakhmi Es jurm mein khatakaar kayi aur bhi hai Choti choti baato pe yu mayus hona thik nahi Daman e ziist mein mushqilaat kayi aur bhi hai Ek nazar es kaasah e gadaai pe bhi ho ya rab Janti hu teri duniya mein kangaal kayi aur bhi hai Sanaa Khwaa --- > Admirer Kaasah e gadai --- > Begger's Bowl
this time babydoll..some words was difficult because of URDU..but still good work..reps Note..sorry have to spread reps.Ek rep udhar rahi..
@ vini..lol Thnx dear @ Devilshly_pur$ thnx aur kahiye aap ko kaunse word difficult lage samjne mein ?
Hum se puche koi maayare mohabbat kya hai Hum ne barso kisi bande ko khuda maana hai ..wah wah onse i wrote ... ek masoom si shaay ka naam hai muhabbat seene main aag aur thokar main zamana hai kalam kabile taareef hai ..!
Good one baby doll .. Didn't know u write such stuff .. keep it up .. According to me .. Kangaal should be replaced by "Miskeen" .. just a better choice of word I think ..
well Mansub -- > Related Khatakaar --- > Guilty Zamaan e ziist --- > Fabric of life Sabab -- > Cause Marzaat -- > illness
@notty_lad thnx for reading n for the suggestion too par " Kangaal " maine rythm ko dhyan mein rakh te hue likha hai..phir bhi agar thik nahi hai to i ll edit it
"Sirf tum hi na the jisne de saza-e-ruswayi is dil ke gunah-gaar kayi aur bhi hai" Very good.....liked it completely.
